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I heard pounding footsteps. Closer. Closer. Closer. Were they mine? Where was I? All I knew was, I need to get away, far away.

“{Player}” A slurred echoing sound ran through the trees in the surrounding forest around me.

I heard more footsteps. More and more. Too many to count. I looked behind myself. Stunned, shocked, traumatized, I ran faster than I’ve ever ran in my life. Have I done this before? Why does this seem familiar?

“{Player}” The voice croaked. It seemingly came from the trees. The footsteps were getting louder. Louder. Louder and louder. Was I even moving? How was I going to get out? I kept moving. I kept running. The only thing that went through my mind was, “Get out.”

“G-g-g-g-g--g” The voice stuttered like an old computer would after ten years of not being used. “G-g-g-g-g-eeeeeeeeee--e-ee-e-ettt-t-t-t-” The voice got louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o” Louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-ouuuuuuuu-u-u-u-u-” And louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-u-u-u-u-u-t-t-t-t-t-t”

Blackness.

I awoke in a dark cave and what surrounded me was inhuman. Bodies. Man woman and child all in a circle around me. I heard crying. Loud. Louder. So loud I could barely hear my thoughts. They weren’t mine…..

The sound.

It was coming from the…..

The…..

Bodies.




They all suddenly jerked their heads upward. They were footsteps in the forest. The inhumanity in them. Empty eye sockets. A skull like face. Pale skin. Rags for clothes. Blood, everywhere.


“R-r-r-r-r-r------uu-u-u-u-----n-n-n-n-n-nn” All of them spoke. A shriek entered my ears. It sounded awful.

I couldn’t stand it. I ran out of the cave. I heard pounding footsteps. Closer. Closer. Closer. Were they mine? Where was I? All I knew was, I need to get away, far away.

“{Player}” A slurred echoing sound ran through the trees in the surrounding forest around me.

I heard more footsteps. More and more. Too many to count. I looked behind myself. Stunned, shocked, traumatized, I ran faster than I’ve ever ran in my life. Have I done this before? Why does this seem familiar?

“{Player}” The voice croaked. It seemingly came from the trees. The footsteps were getting louder. Louder. Louder and louder. Was I even moving? How was I going to get out? I kept moving. I kept running. The only thing that went through my mind was, “Get out.”

“G-g-g-g-g--g” The voice stuttered like an old computer would after ten years of not being used. “G-g-g-g-g-eeeeeeeeee--e-ee-e-ettt-t-t-t-” The voice got louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o” Louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-ouuuuuuuu-u-u-u-u-” And louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-u-u-u-u-u-t-t-t-t-t-t”

Blackness.

I awoke in a dark cave and what surrounded me was inhuman. Bodies. Man woman and child all in a circle around me. I heard crying. Loud. Louder. So loud I could barely hear my thoughts. They weren’t mine…..



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Update #1 : by Fia Rue 12/30/2019 2:11:54 amDec 30th, 2019

I reposted the entire story in this update plus the other half. Skip to the part you haven't read. Enjoy horror movie groundhog's day!


RUN


I heard pounding footsteps. Closer. Closer. Closer. Were they mine? Where was I? All I knew was, I need to get away, far away.


“{Player}” A slurred echoing sound ran through the trees in the surrounding forest around me.

I heard more footsteps. More and more. Too many to count. I looked behind myself. Stunned, shocked, traumatized, I ran faster than I’ve ever ran in my life. Have I done this before? Why does this seem familiar?

“{Player}” The voice croaked. It seemingly came from the trees. The footsteps were getting louder. Louder. Louder and louder. Was I even moving? How was I going to get out? I kept moving. I kept running. The only thing that went through my mind was, “Get out.”

“G-g-g-g-g--g” The voice stuttered like an old computer would after ten years of not being used. “G-g-g-g-g-eeeeeeeeee--e-ee-e-ettt-t-t-t-” The voice got louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o” Louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-ouuuuuuuu-u-u-u-u-” And louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-u-u-u-u-u-t-t-t-t-t-t”

Blackness.

I awoke in a dark cave and what surrounded me was inhuman. Bodies. All women all in a circle around me. I heard crying. Loud. Louder. So loud I could barely hear my thoughts. They weren’t mine…..

The sound.

It was coming from the…..

The…..

Bodies.


They all suddenly jerked their heads upward. They were footsteps in the forest. The inhumanity in them. Empty eye sockets. A skull like face. Pale skin. Rags for clothes. Blood, everywhere.


“R-r-r-r-r-r------uu-u-u-u-----n-n-n-n-n-nn” All of them spoke. A shriek entered my ears. It sounded awful.

I couldn’t stand it. I ran out of the cave. I heard pounding footsteps. Closer. Closer. Closer. Were they mine? Where was I? All I knew was, I needed to get away, far away.

“{Player}” A slurred echoing sound ran through the trees in the surrounding forest around me.

I heard more footsteps. More and more. Too many to count. I looked behind myself. Stunned, shocked, traumatized, I ran faster than I’ve probably ever ran in my life. I knew there was one…. Or more, accounts that I’ve run faster, I just can’t remember. Have I done this before? Why does this seem familiar?

“{Player}” The voice croaked. It seemingly came from the trees. The footsteps were getting louder. Louder. Louder and louder. Too loud. Oddly familiarly loud. Was I even moving? How was I going to get out? I kept trying to move. I kept running. The only thing that went through my mind was, “Get out.”

“G-g-g-g-g--g” The voice stuttered like an old computer would after ten years of not being used. “G-g-g-g-g-eeeeeeeeee--e-ee-e-ettt-t-t-t-” The voice got louder…. again? “O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o” Louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-ouuuuuuuu-u-u-u-u-” And louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-u-u-u-u-u-t-t-t-t-t-t”

Blackness.

I awoke in a dark cave and what surrounded me was inhuman. Bodies.All women all in a circle around me. I then heard something too familiar. A crying noise. Someone, something was crying. What was it?

But then I realized what it was.

The sound was coming from…..

From…

The

Bodies.


All their heads jerked upward. They were the footsteps I heard in the forest. They looked like the monster from under someone’s bed. No eyes in their eye sockets, pale white skin, skull like face. All they could stutter out of their barely working mouths was, “R-r-r-r-r-r-uuuu-u-u-u-u-u-nnn-n-n-nn-n-n”

A loud shriek entered my ears. I wasn’t as terrified as I thought I would be. Have I done this before?

Before I could even move, I was knocked down to my feet. A searing pain pressed hard into my body.

“W-w-w-wwwwwwww-e-e-eeeeelll-l-l-lllllcccc---c-c-c-oooo-o--o-ommmm---e-e-e-ee” Said the voice. It started to sound more and more familiar as the pain grew worse. “Wwww-w-w-wweeee-e-el-l-l-lllcc--c-ccco--oooommm-m-m-eeee” I soon screamed as the pain worsened and as flesh began to fall off my face. “Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee-e-eeeellllllllllccccccc-c-c-cccooooooommmmmmme-e-eeee” The voice began to become more and more clear. “Welccome” My voice said.

I soon became blind. I heard something. Something I needed. A body. I heard footsteps run out of the cave I was in. But closer to what I assumed was the entrance. I jolted upward in a fast manner. How could I move so fast? I smelled the flesh. I smelled life. I needed that. I had a craving for that.

I began jolting for the person. Running, and running and running. Have I done this before? I heard hundreds of other footsteps following me. This was now a race.

I heard my voice again. Except in the trees.

I heard it again. But louder. I was speaking. But, I wasn’t at the same time.

I blacked out suddenly.


I awoke to crying. Suddenly, I immediately knew where I was. I was where I was. I quickly had to warn myself. “RUN” I yelled in unison with my other undead selves.

I heard a shriek.

Then pitter patter of footsteps. I needed to stop myself from getting myself. I ran faster than I ever have in my life.


I began jolting for the person. Running, and running and running. Have I done this before? I heard hundreds of other footsteps following me. This was now a race.

I heard my voice again. Except in the trees.

I heard it again. But louder. I was speaking. But, I wasn’t at the same time.

I blacked out suddenly.


I awoke to crying. Suddenly, I immediately knew where I was. I was where I was. I quickly had to warn myself. “RUN” I yelled in unison with my other undead selves.


But instead of hearing that all too familiar shriek, all I felt was life. I was killing myself to give myself life. I heard myself shriek as I began to say “welcome” over and over again. As my vision repaired itself, I saw my undead self, I realized I would need to run. I jolted towards the entrance to the cave.


I heard pounding footsteps. Closer. Closer. Closer. Were they mine? Where was I? All I knew was, I need to get away, far away.

“{Player}” A slurred echoing sound ran through the trees in the surrounding forest around me.

I heard more footsteps. More and more. Too many to count. I looked behind myself. Stunned, shocked, traumatized, I ran faster than I’ve ever ran in my life. Have I done this before? Why does this seem familiar?

“{Player}” The voice croaked. It seemingly came from the trees. The footsteps were getting louder. Louder. Louder and louder. Was I even moving? How was I going to get out? I kept moving. I kept running. The only thing that went through my mind was, “Get out.”

“G-g-g-g-g--g” The voice stuttered like an old computer would after ten years of not being used. “G-g-g-g-g-eeeeeeeeee--e-ee-e-ettt-t-t-t-” The voice got louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o” Louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-ouuuuuuuu-u-u-u-u-” And louder. “O-o-o-o-o-o-u-u-u-u-u-t-t-t-t-t-t”

Blackness.

I awoke in a dark cave and what surrounded me was inhuman. Bodies. All women all in a circle around me. I heard crying. Loud. Louder. So loud I could barely hear my thoughts. They weren’t mine…..

The sound.

It was coming from the…..

The…..

Bodies.


They all suddenly jerked their heads upward. They were footsteps in the forest. The inhumanity in them. Empty eye sockets. A skull like face. Pale skin. Rags for clothes. Blood, everywhere.


“R-r-r-r-r-r------uu-u-u-u-----n-n-n-n-n-nn” All of them spoke. A shriek entered my ears. It sounded awful.

I couldn’t stand it. I ran out of the cave.


Have I done this before?




The End

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12/29/2019 5:45 am
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Story sound creepy ! Can't wait till end of contest to read all , but this is definitely a good story
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