Advice perhaps: talk a tad Louder, or maybe turn Music off as well. :P
-Charlie (of RoS)

Nice channel name, easy to remember and sparks interest.

The video itself seems to tick all the right boxes, except for the sound. 

The sound is VERY low. I have my sound up all the way and I can still barely hear it. If there's a way you can turn the levels up on your end or get a better mic or talk louder, it would really help. There's a few other issues with the microphone--when you say "s" sounds it really whistles painfully, so either you're too loud for the mic or the mic needs to be replaced with something nicer.

I'm also hearing your chair or something creak constantly, so that's either the mic picking up background sounds so you need a new one or new settings on it or something--or try to get a different chair and sit still.

Also, the minecraft music and sound effects in the background can also be turned down. I'm hearing a lot of that more so than your voice. You can just lower it or even turn it off totally since sound like the default music doesn't affect gameplay and gets repetitive after a while. A lot of Youtubers just turn that off.