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°αshℓєy° The Nightmare Before I Woke Up (Story)

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avatar XiRiX33
Level 30 : Artisan Pixel Puncher
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So Before I Start Off This Story Is My 50 Sub Special Haha So Yea No Mean Comments Or Stuff Im Not That Such Of A Writter Haha So Lets Start!
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I woke up finding myself on top of a bus as I almost fell off, but I was hanging on until it stopped. Eleven minutes later the bus stopped as I jumped off it. I walked back home then as I unlocked the door I said "Weird.. How did I get on top of that bus?" When I got in I realised it was time for school. "God seriously!?" I snapped. I grabbed my books and sprinted to the bus stop, only to realise the school bus had forgotten me. "Wait Wait!" I yelled as I ran trying to catch up with the bus. My friend Sam saw me when she opened the window and shouted "Riley grab my arm!" When I grabbed her arm and climbed inside the bus from the window I felt weird. The wind was blowing hard and an earthquake was starting. The bus started shaking and I said "Sam Whats Happening?"
"Um, Riley- it's an earthquake!" She  screamed as everybody yelled and worried. The bus started falling under the ground into a pit of lava, when suddenly the bus stopped. It had gotten trapped in the middle of the hole. The door was locked, and in my terror I reached for my phone and tried calling a friend for help. "R-riley who are you c-calling?" Sam stuttered.
"Zach, he's the only one who isn't on the bus!" I retorted. Zach answered the call and said "Hello?" 
"It's Riley, you have to help us!" I screamed into the phone. Zach replied "Whats happening?"  
"There's been an earthquake and we're stuck in a hole!" I cried.
"Oh god don't worry I'm coming!" Zach ran out of his house.
Chapter 2 Coming Out Soon!
Credit To sophiepanda04 For Fixing My Grammer Thanks!<3
Creditcredit to sophiepanda04 for fixing my grammer
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09/28/2014 8:32 pm
Level 29 : Expert Scribe
LLMeow
man these stories so short i should try em... mine are longer and scarier, hehehe
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09/29/2014 3:58 am
Level 30 : Artisan Pixel Puncher
XiRiX33
nah its chapter 1 chapter 2 is gonna be longer
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09/28/2014 12:35 am
Level 24 : Expert Artist
Narotiza
The Nightmare Before I-Woke-Up-mas
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09/27/2014 12:13 pm
Level 48 : Master Lad
rotarydial
Some people get really mean about grammar and caps on every word, so before one of those people pops up I've fixed the grammar for you...

I woke up finding myself on top of a bus as I almost fell off, but I was hanging on until it stopped. Eleven minutes later the bus stopped as I jumped off it. I walked back home then as I unlocked the door I said "Weird.. How did I get on top of that bus?" When I got in I realised it was time for school. "God seriously!?" I snapped. I grabbed my books and sprinted to the bus stop, only to realise the school bus had forgotten me. "Wait Wait!" I yelled as I ran trying to catch up with the bus. My friend Sam saw me when she opened the window and shouted "Riley grab my arm!" When I grabbed her arm and climbed inside the bus from the window I felt weird. The wind was blowing hard and an earthquake was starting. The bus started shaking and I said "Sam Whats Happening?"
"Um, Riley- it's an earthquake!" She  screamed as everybody yelled and worried. The bus started falling under the ground into a pit of lava, when suddenly the bus stopped. It had gotten trapped in the middle of the hole. The door was locked, and in my terror I reached for my phone and tried calling a friend for help. "R-riley who are you c-calling?" Sam stuttered.
"Zach, he's the only one who isn't on the bus!" I retorted. Zach answered the call and said "Hello?"
"It's Riley, you have to help us!" I screamed into the phone. Zach replied "Whats happening?"  
"There's been an earthquake and we're stuck in a hole!" I cried.
"Oh god don't worry I'm coming!" Zach ran out of his house.

Please don't take that as an insult or whatever, but people get really touchy and sometimes they say really mean things, just copy + paste that if you want. You don't have to I just wanted to give you the option before they started being mean <3
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09/27/2014 12:23 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Pixel Puncher
XiRiX33
i didnt expect saying it but your gonna be my helper totaly AND GUESS WHAT?! YOU CAN REQUEST ANYTHING WHENEVER YOU WANT YOU CAN EVEN REQUEST A MILLION TIMES! I WILL COPY AND PASTE THIS THANKS THOUGH!
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09/27/2014 12:48 pm
Level 48 : Master Lad
rotarydial
Hehe, thanks<3
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