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Story Reviews: Mushrooms War with the Soul Sand

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Mushrooms War with the Soul Sand (Review)

Author: kittycorn_kew

Ratings: 🟣🔵🟢🟡

On this Minecraft Community Fansite, we are all looking forward to Minecraft Stories. This story is well related to Minecraft. Mushrooms and soul sand are all common found items.or bl9cks in Minecraft, so this story is very classic, but a nice one. Somehow the mushrooms has started a fight with the soul sand, but you can provide more background details, for example how did the soul sand destroy life in Minecraft. Also, you can explain a bit of the fight. You may try to explain a little bit about the plan. Moreover, try to use more descriptive language, which helps readers to imagine. Lastly, you might want to make to story longer. Its worth it!

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03/27/2022 6:27 am
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Um...you notice that I write books right?
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03/27/2022 6:28 am
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LucisFerrer, LittleDino2022, all of us write
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03/27/2022 7:05 am
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