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avatar MagicDoggo
Level 8 : Apprentice Blacksmith
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This little story I wrote is just a little fan-story based on the game Undertale by Toby Fox. And I hope you enjoy!
Also, if you find grammar error, part of story looking wrong, or anything confusing, don't hesitate to comment!



Hope you enjoyed it! If you did, leave a diamond! If you loved, drop a favourite! If you like my stuff and want to keep notified of upcoming projects, why not sub? Bye now! :3
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Image update! : 05/04/2016 7:30:01 pmMay 4th, 2016

Updated the story, by making it all one big image instead of several smaller ones for improved reading or whatever

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yAYA!!!! tEM THInks DIS GUD!!!!11!!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • June 9, 2017, 3:12 pm
MMmmmMm THANK YU!!!!!1!
  • Tails894
  • Level 14
  • Journeyman Pokemon
  • March 15, 2017, 6:24 am
Dont forget to digest it
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • March 15, 2017, 10:10 am
Temmie flakes in yo mouth
Nice!!!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • December 14, 2016, 2:42 pm
Thanks! :3
  • Shquaz
  • Level 17
  • Journeyman Dragonborn
  • June 7, 2016, 10:03 am
I have not red it cause I am very lasy busy, but it's very good. XD tem out of temmie
  • Raphezarov
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • May 14, 2016, 4:51 am
I Gave This...



a tEM OUTTA tEM!!11!!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • May 14, 2016, 5:54 am
yaYA
THANKS U SO MUCH!!!1!!1!!
  • Raphezarov
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • May 14, 2016, 6:29 am
nU PROBLUM!!11!!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • May 14, 2016, 6:31 am
yaYA!! tEM SO GUD!!
  • Raphezarov
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • May 14, 2016, 6:44 am
tEm tEM tEM tEM tEM tEM

tEMMIE FLAKES!!1!1!!!
  • Raphezarov
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • May 14, 2016, 6:45 am
Ok,That's Enough Messing Around With tEM

The tEM Is Watching
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • May 14, 2016, 6:45 am
tEMMIE FLAKES?!?!
cAN I HAZ??????
  • Raphezarov
  • Level 1
  • New Explorer
  • May 14, 2016, 6:46 am
yEEEE
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • May 14, 2016, 6:50 am
yAZ!!!
Great story XD
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 10, 2016, 6:00 am
Thanks a lot X3
nice story :D
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 11:03 am
Thank you very much! X3
  • Nyamaru
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Network
  • April 9, 2016, 12:41 pm
*seeing a temmie village fills you with determination XD
*btw in social studies vocabulary I drew a temmie village XDDDD
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 1:00 pm
XD
XD
  • Nyamaru
  • Level 10
  • Journeyman Network
  • April 8, 2016, 6:07 pm
Temmie fakes are paper XD how do u git the undertale font?
P.S Popreel <3
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 8, 2016, 6:09 pm
Temmie *flakes XD
I downloaded an Undertale styled font called "Determination Mono" and wrote it on Microsoft Office, then took screennshots of the pages and saved it as images on Paint x3
Yay! Thanks for notifying! :3
  • Hazlf
  • Level 20
  • Expert Nerd
  • April 8, 2016, 5:35 pm
Whoa. Great story. xDDD
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 8, 2016, 5:36 pm
Thank you! :3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!
  • Kylo Bren
  • Level 44
  • Master Lad
  • April 8, 2016, 5:28 pm
*sobs uncontrollably* ...IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 8, 2016, 5:31 pm
... really? XD
Thank you so much! :D
  • Kylo Bren
  • Level 44
  • Master Lad
  • April 9, 2016, 3:57 am
Hue, no problem ^^

i always knew the temmie flakes were a fraud! :O
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 7:21 am
Temmie flakes are just paper... I'd totally eat them though X3
  • Kylo Bren
  • Level 44
  • Master Lad
  • April 9, 2016, 8:51 am
Mmmm, paper.... cx
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 11:03 am
If temmies love it, it must be good! X3
  • Kylo Bren
  • Level 44
  • Master Lad
  • April 9, 2016, 11:15 am
YE !!!! TEMMIE GOT GUD TASTE !!!
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 11:21 am
sogud!
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 8, 2016, 12:48 am
Temmie flakes are op
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 8, 2016, 4:52 pm
temmie is love, temmie is lyfe
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 9, 2016, 5:03 am
ikr
I'm praying for Temmie god every day that's why Temmies don't killing me for not eating Temmie flakes
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 7:22 am
You'd best eat tem flakes so you don't bother praying all time XD
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 9, 2016, 7:30 am
One time I ate a bag of Temmie flakes and killed sans for 5 seconds
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 7:31 am
... okay...
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 9, 2016, 7:33 am
Yeah, killing sans is feels so... powerful...
* You filled with discomfort
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 9, 2016, 7:43 am
But Chara is powerfuller
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 9, 2016, 7:23 pm
But you can't fite chara
you can only chose
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 10, 2016, 6:01 am
You can't fite Chara, but Chara can erase you
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 10, 2016, 6:20 am
Chose do not
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 10, 2016, 6:28 am
nu, I wants erase ;u;
  • _Forerunner_
  • Level 68
  • High Grandmaster Skinner
  • April 10, 2016, 6:42 am
but y ;c
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 10, 2016, 6:43 am
becus then I can remake le whole world again
  • idk lol
  • Level 17
  • Journeyman Crafter
  • April 7, 2016, 3:24 pm
HOI! ME WANT TEMMIE FLAKES!
Nice story, Luke ;)
  • MagicDoggo
  • Level 8
  • Apprentice Blacksmith
  • April 7, 2016, 5:27 pm
*gives tem flakes*
huehuehue

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