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The book of life.

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Lyte was walking through the forest of Irunga and saw a mountain with a waterfall coming down in,causing Lyte to turn his head. Lyte walked towards the waterfall when he saw a horse with a broken leg. He said " Poor thing... " He got some food and fed it. He tried to make it stand up but the horse was too heavy. He tried again, this time succeeding. He rode the horse across the plains until he saw a temple-ish building. He jumped off the horse and went in it. He saw past the dust and fog and noticed a book. He opened it up and it said. The man who opens the book of life shall be the one to end the life. He shall save the ones he meet and end the ones he doesn't. Lyte looked around and noticed the way he went in was blocked off. He looked at the book again.This time it was floating above the table it was on. He tried to grab it but it went through his hand and the book with through his body and he blacked out. When he awoke he was in his cottage.He got up and heard a * Boom! * He ran out of his cottage and saw a group of teenagers shooting off fireworks. He grabbed his bow and arrow and went after the teenagers. He yelled at them " Hey! Stop blowing those up. " They turned and stopped. They all said at once " The villagers are trying to kill us! "

If you want me to continue this story...don't worry i'll continue it no matter what!
But I will like it if you leave a diamond and maybe even a favorite?
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09/27/2012 6:38 pm
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onepieceop101
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I'll put a rock in your mouth
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09/27/2012 6:39 pm
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Linkofages
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O-o?
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09/27/2012 6:41 pm
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onepieceop101
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Till you choke and that is for hurting my feelings
-cocopiece
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09/27/2012 6:42 pm
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Linkofages
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..ok?
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09/27/2012 6:43 pm
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onepieceop101
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Go to sleep
*takes a knife and watchs link as he sleeps in his bed*
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09/27/2012 6:44 pm
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Linkofages
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I dont sleep :D
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09/27/2012 4:44 pm
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onepieceop101
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Eh.
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09/26/2012 5:12 pm
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craftykids
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It looks pretty good so far, but I suggest adding more of an introduction. I don't think it's so good to go pretty much straight to the Book. But other than that, it looks pretty good.

Also, you shouldn't put it in separate blogs. You should put it all in one blog, and update that when you write more. I'm going to favorite this so that, if you just update this post, I can see what happens next.

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09/26/2012 5:28 pm
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Linkofages
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Thank you for the advice i'll remember it in the future! Also im planning on doing more stories in the future.
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