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The journey to the end.

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avatar Gamecool 10
Level 20 : Expert Archer
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As I broke the stone with my iron pickaxe in hand, I noticed something peculiar about the next set of stone. It was assorted into bricks, some with vines growing in between.

"That's odd..." I said as I swung back my pick, ready to strike.

I swung at the stone bricks until it broke but what happened next almost gave me a heart attack. a small, rat-like creature emerged from the destroyed blockand bit me. I jumped back in surprise and quickly glanced at my minor cut. I pulled out my iron sword but when I looked up, there were two of the creatures. I quickly readied my sword, and charged. They were quick to fall and left minor cuts but the surprise they gave me is too hard to describe with words.

I entered the dim-lit structure and looked around. There was a chest and passage on the left.

I decided to loot the chest for rare finds. Inside were 2 sticky messes of cobwebs, another iron sword, an apple, and a golden chestplate. I quickly put it on.

I explored into the passage and found a corridor. I went forward and went down some stairs. I cameacross so many corridors that after 8 minutes, I realized that I would never get out of this place.I turned another corner but found a room I had never encountered before. It looked somewhat like this..

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I noticed that there was one chest on each side of the room. I quickly took all the items, which were actually not good finds, and went up a strange platform.

"What is that.." I said as I stared into the abyss.

In the center of the room. There was some kind of portal frame. In the portal frame lay the universe itself. I looked into it, hypnotized by it's beauty. But shorty afterwards, I felt a sharp sting on my buttocks.

"YEOW!"

One of the small creatures had appeared out of nowhere and bit me. I was so surprised thta I jumped forward. But that is when I looked down..I was..falling..into..the..portal.

I blacked out.

Hey guys, I hope you enjoyed this little story of mine. I need to ask you a question though. Do you want me to make a part two or.. just end it there. send me a Private message or give your opinion in the comments.


Thanks!
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11/10/2013 7:32 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
YcleptCrazy
There were a few grammar mistakes here and there. I personally feel as if it was rushed and it felt a little awkward.
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11/10/2013 10:36 pm
Level 20 : Expert Archer
Gamecool 10
I see, I wasn't in the writing mood but felt like publishing something half-decent.
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