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The Love Within

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Mooniium avatar Mooniium
Level 20 : Expert Blueberry
My heart is full of love;
Of happiness and joy;
All things that are pure;
The things that matter most;

This love I feel is true;
My heart beats for only you;
Does your heart beat for me too?
Love from you that is new;

Will this love exist forever?
Or will it fade away;
Will it feel like it is better?
Than the flowers in May;

My heart longs to meet yours;
Every night and day and hour;
When we meet;
Will our hearts bloom like a flower?

Is this love as true as it seems?
As hard as steel, as pure as light;
Is this love truly real?
Or only in our dreams;

I want to feel like this is true;
This love between me and you;
But I can't help doubting;
What you've said to me;

What if I'm not the one?
Or you find someone else;
Will my love still matter?
If the heart holding it is broken;

The love within my heart;
Reaches far with no end;
If my heart were to break apart;
It would be my job to mend;
Hello! :)
This poem is my entry for the Love Poem Contest!
I tried my best to fit the theme, hopefully you guys enjoy it.

Also, I made a skin to go along with the poem:
ღ ℙ𝕒𝕀π•₯𝕖𝕝 𝕃𝕠𝕧𝕖 ღ

Fun Fact: The thumbnail I used is "The Heart Nebula."

02/13/2021 11:31 amhistory
Level 25 : Expert Imposter
VxnChxn avatar
So Cute and amazing for the month, i love it
02/03/2021 10:20 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Pig
Wannabe Technoblade
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moon, i would like to know, how long did you spend on this?
02/03/2021 10:24 am
Level 20 : Expert Blueberry
Mooniium avatar
Hmm, considering I wrote it all last night, I would say about 30 minutes or more, to an hour. I also had to go find the picture I used in the thumbnail, so yeah, about an hour more or less.
02/03/2021 5:17 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Skinner
Kingslayerc avatar
lol should have not made my poem if I saw this. I lost
02/03/2021 9:08 am
Level 20 : Expert Blueberry
Mooniium avatar
Aww, I really loved your poem. :)
You didn’t lose, you made your poem about something you loved, and that’s all that matters.
02/03/2021 2:57 am
Level 22 : Expert Procrastinator
Grqy- avatar
Eyyyyy... sounds nice and epic. (but not better than mine... hehehe)
02/02/2021 11:05 pm
Level 22 : Expert Geek
Cardinal System
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Wow Mooniichan, this sounds like something straight out of my private collection! Great choice of powerful and subtle words. The questioning theme, mix of joy and sadness, it takes me right back to high school. +1
02/02/2021 11:12 pm
Level 20 : Expert Blueberry
Mooniium avatar
Aha, thank you so much Cardinaldo! :) I kind of tried to make something not too on the romantic side, but not too on the heartbroken side, either. Speaking of high school, I guess I accidentally described a bit of how I used to feel with my ex bf. Seems like he found another girl, but I guess that's how life works. :')
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