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-The Minecraft Hobo Adventures-
-Chapter one-
It all started falling, for what seems like forever, in a huge brown dome with some words and a loading box. The words said something about loading chunks, but I didn't really care at all considering the fact that I was falling. All of a sudden, I got dizzy. Everything around me started turning into blocks and squares, then a bright flash of light hit my face. I felt like I had just seen the light for the very first time. Looking around, I saw the world. A world that I would have never imagined; a world that felt so free and exciting.
Looking around I saw what was a rose. Looking at the rose I hit it. I jumped when it popped up. It took me a minute to figure out that I could pick it up and when I did I looked at it with excitement. I ran into what was a jungle full of square pigs and sheep. I kept running and found a cute little village with people. I kept going until I noticed that the sun was not far from setting. I ran and collected some wood and dirt and ran back to the little village. I saw the villagers and ran for the village. I asked if I could stay and they nodded their heads; they never really talked much. When I got settled in my little home I made a crafting bench and with that I made a couple of wooden tools and a chest. I went out side and harvested the wheat because after a day of running I was quite hungry. Then as I was harvesting, the sun hit the edge of the world and colors flew in the air! Like a painting. A very beautiful painting.
As I was enjoying the sun, now almost completely gone, I heard the villagers run for their homes like a storm or something was coming. All the doors slammed, and I got a little chill that something was coming. I ran back to my house and with the one torch I put it in my house to have some light. I looked out my window and looked at the dark and ghostly forest. I though I heard a moan and a grumble come from the forest but then I thought my mind was playing a trick on me. Then looking at the forest I saw something that I had never even imagined in a beautiful world like this. Its red eyes looking at me. Looking into my blocky soul. Then I saw more red eyes. As I was deep in thought, on what it could be, just then my heart jumped when I heard what sounded like a door being beat down! My door! My door was beat down! By those red eyes! The thing started biting me and attacking me. I couldn't do anything.
then everything faded away...
then everything faded away...
-End of chapter one-
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"I sprinted into a canvas of green, full of strange square pink blocks, they looked alot like small pigs only alot more retro... I turned around only to see a huge white block, it scared the living daylight out of me so i was quick to defend myself and punch it, and thats when 2 small white blocks popped off... It was gradually getting darker as I ventured into this strange green place almost like walking slowly towards darkness, it felt as if something was going to take me. I later found out that I was in a jungle, although no sign of any monkeys, bananas, snakes... nothing just sheep, pigs, chickens and cows."
Btw this is my first story...
Thanks anyway for helping me! :D