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The Offer (Cave Hanger Entry)

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electron128's Avatar electron128
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The zombie and the spider were just inches from Steve, and if they wanted to, they could’ve maimed/killed him. The spider was lusting for the miner’s blood; he hadn't seen a miner for years but had strong hatred towards them. Unfortunately for the spider, the zombie had an opposing idea; he wanted to keep the miner alive.
“He should be dead, along with ALL the other miners who mindlessly tear up our underground home!” the spider argued. “NO! He could be very useful to us! I was once a miner just like HIM! I KNEW people like him!” the zombie harshly replied.
After hacking at the gold for hours, Steve turned around to eat some lunch.
“HEY! You two! What do you think you’re doing here?” Steve snapped.
“We’re just watching you mine. That’s all.” replied the spider, preparing his fangs for Steve’s neck.
“LIAR!” the zombie said right as the spider jumped at Steve.
Acting quickly, the zombie shoved the spider into the lava.

“Wow, thanks zombie!” Steve was surprised that a zombie just helped him.
The burning spider then leaped out of the lava, aiming for the zombie. Instead, the spider met Steve's lovely stone blade.
The zombie tossed Steve an iron pickaxe so he could mine the gold, then told him: “I have an offer.”
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10/01/2015 4:25 pm
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GrayRemnant
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Nice story!  :)
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09/17/2015 2:58 pm
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Jalaqua
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Awesome! :D
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09/15/2015 8:25 am
Level 19 : Journeyman Pokemon
CreeperSlayerD
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This is my favroute story so far but it does not make sense if the zombie was helping the miner why did he throw out the ladder??
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09/15/2015 7:52 pm
Level 26 : Expert Unicorn
electron128
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I didn't have enough room to explain that, but the zombie threw the ladder into the lava because the spider threatened to kill him if he didn't.
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09/15/2015 8:41 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Pokemon
CreeperSlayerD
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but isn't the zombie already dead?
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09/14/2015 9:00 pm
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UNDERTALE_CREW
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I like the unique storyline! (sorry if I'm an idiot, but what's the offer xD)
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09/14/2015 9:07 pm
Level 26 : Expert Unicorn
electron128
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Thanks!
What the offer was is never mentioned directly in the text, but the zombie hints at it while aruging with the spider.
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09/14/2015 9:09 pm
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UNDERTALE_CREW
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Oooooooh, ok. I did a somewhat similar story, Steve gets a pet.
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09/14/2015 7:17 pm
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Minecraft Imagineer
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I don't know if I am being salty or not, I probably am, but your story has a similar concept to mine... I guess great minds think alike! Good luck!
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09/14/2015 7:20 pm
Level 26 : Expert Unicorn
electron128
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Ahh, I didn't really read any of the OTHER entries before putting up mine. My bad -.-
Good luck to you too!
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