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The Princess Warrior (Fifty Subscriber Special)

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The princess flipped her long red hair over her shoulder. "He's a... a prick I tell you!" A maid folding the princess's clothes nearby looked up and glared. "Fiona! Princesses shouldn't talk like that." the maid said. Princess Fiona gave an exasperated sigh. She was a seventeen-year-old princess, destined to marry a prince and let her doting husband rule the kingdom. Like she'd ever let that happen. Fiona was a descendant of the noblest female warriors ever, the valkyries.



Only the Queen knew the secret of the valkyries because she herself carried the gene. At the brink of death because of a deadly illness, the Queen told her daughter the secret. Soon later, Fiona uncovered a few dusty scrolls and books containing precious information about valkyries. That their favorite weapons were crossbows or swords, how they tamed the legendary pegasi, how they didn't let men boss them around. They also didn't let fathers boss them. "Fee, I honestly don't understand why you want to train as a... a soldier!" the maid spat. "Fiona grumbled but didn't respond. The maid, or Ida, had been Fiona's best friend since childhood.



Earlier that morning, Fiona had the courage to ask her father, or the King, if she could learn how to wield a weapon. Unfortunately for Fiona, she had asked this in front of the entire court. They all began to laugh, and her father claimed that women didn't know how to fight. Princess Fiona had tried to argue, but instead the King sent her to her room. The princess stormed back to her room, her face red with embarrassment.



"I'm leaving for a walk." Fiona said, throwing her princess tiara on the floor. Ida sighed but didn't comment. Fiona slipped on a black cloak and ducked past the few guards by her door. She soon made it to the main gate. Fiona ran out and into the huge forest close to the castle. Tears spilled down her cheeks as she ran. It wasn't fair. Girls could fight, surely they could. Suddenly, a huge branch seemed to appear and she tripped and fell. Fiona felt something sharp scrape against her right shoulder and she let out a cry of pain. She untied her cloak and pulled it down. Surprisingly, there was no injury. Instead, a strange black design was marked into her shoulder.



Fiona gasped when suddenly, she heard a loud swoosh. She looked up, but there was nothing but the sky, slowly beginning to darken. How can you reach me? You are not of age yet, little human. Fiona gasped again and stumbled. "Who said that?!" she cried. I am not speaking to you out loud, little human. I am in your thoughts. "Th-thoughts? But, you can still hear me when I talk out loud? Am I going mad?!" Fiona asked, confused. Yes, but you are not mad. For I am Caspian. "And telling me your name makes things better...how?" the princess scoffed. Snap! A branch broke behind her. Fiona screamed and turned around. A big shadow emerged from the trees.



To her surprise, it was just a horse. But then, the horse spread its wings. "Wings?! Caspian! Whoever you are, please help me!" Fiona cried. I am in front of you, little human. Fiona's jaw dropped. For I am Caspian, a royal pegasus, the last of my kind. And you, are my valkyrie rider.


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I'm not going to even start how long this took me TwT... but uh, Part Two anyone? If this gets 100 views, I'll put a poll for part two.


Thanks for reading! And again, thank you so much for fifty subscribers, you all are just amazing.


Your crazy but terrible author, skin-maker, eat-all-the-food-in-the-fridge-person,


~Whisper
CreditCredit to my sister for the idea, her version is so much better than mine. Picture Credit: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/47428602306573545/
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08/03/2020 12:29 pm
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You did well, Whisper. :) A tad bit forced, but it definitely works, so good job on the writing so far. ^~^ Good luck with the next part if you write more, and if you do then I'll read that too. :D
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08/03/2020 1:08 pm
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Uh thanks...
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08/03/2020 1:39 pmhistory
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Hm... Sorry if it bothered you~? I just liked the writing, but I guess if that bothers you then sorry. :p You're welcome?
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08/03/2020 4:42 pm
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You didn't lol. I'm just tired. >.<
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08/03/2020 4:55 pm
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Alright. ;3 But try to rest your mind, if you can.
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