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Before we start, thanks for reading. This took a lot of time to write and correct, and it means a lot to me. I am really sad, to be honest, because of the position I got at the contest.
Anyways, enjoy!
- We need more soldiers. Better soldiers.
- And how will we get them? Birth rates are lower than ever, sir.
- There must be a way...
- What about Earth sir?
- They're way too weak, aren't they?
- Hmm.. Nothing we can't change. Let's go talk to The Leader.
... Some weeks later ...
After attacking Earth, the aliens captured one human, and one of each animal. They genetically modified these, and released them in an arena around their world. Steve was the human's name.
Steve sat on the ground, near a giant tree, and stared at the sky. He did not know what to do. He had lost his famlily, his house, everything.
"Where am I?" He thought.
"I must do something, I need to find shelter and food."
He got up, and started walking.
The world was very blocky. He couldn't see a single round shape, except himself, and some animals.
The aliens did not like the way Steve and the animals were, so round and curvy. After some dangerous procedures, they were able to "blockify" them. Steve's memory was erased. He was released into a big arena. Their world was called Rehten. It was a gigantic, almost infinite world, made of blocks. They had one natural satellite, and one star on their solar sistem. One of the planets around them, was Enderia. It was a huge mass of white rock, populated by strange and tall humanoids. Other planets arround them were too small and too hot to be populated.
Meanwhile, Steve was getting smarter. He made a grass bed near a lava pool, to protect himself from the cold. He took branches from trees, and used them to protect himself from wild wolves. Steve found apples from trees, fish from lakes, and crops from the ground. Sometimes, at night, Steve would lie on the ground, look up and talk to himself. Then, he would cry.
After some time, fascinated by Steve, the aliens cloned him. The cloning process was already well known by the aliens, so it was an easy and quick process. 49 clones were made.
Some clones were taken by the aliens, and genetically modified. They were made stronger, smarter, faster. More muscle, more brain, more stamina. Better. Each month, they would choose some clones, enhance them, delete their memory and release them in the arenas again.
In one of theese clones, experiments were taken too hard, and he became too strong. Known as Herobrine, this genetic anomally broke out of the labs, and disappeared into the shadows of the night. The last thing the aliens saw, were his white eyes, bright with hate and anger. Underestimating him, the aliens didn't chase him, thinking he would perish from the cold night, starve to death, or be killed by wolves.
Their plan was working. The Steves were even stronger, starting to explore, hunt, and mine. They were too strong, and nothing was on their way. Yet. The aliens went hunting on other planets, looking for possible enemies for the Steves. They brought back Creepers, Giant Spiders, and Endermen. They also made new enemies from old, dead corpses. They armed skeletons with bows, and some zombies with swords and shovels.
After some time, the perfect Steve was created. He was strong, intelligent, and fast. He solved all their speed tests, endurance tests, and intelligence testa. Sadly for the aliens, this perfect Steve didn't want to obey them. In the middle of the last tests, he broke out and ran. On his way out, from small windows, he could see shiny, beautiful ores he had never seem before. He tried breaking the glass, but it didn't work. At the end of the corridor, there was a door. He heard footsteps. He ran to the door, and kicked it open.
After walking trough it, Steve found himself in beautiful world, full of animals he was familiar with. He ran to the woods, scared by the tought of a potential chase. He didn't want to be on that planet. He wanted to escape. After several days, he found a shiny rock, dark as the night. Breaking it with his bare hands, he made a doorway with those rocks, and using some flint and stone, he lit it. The purple light filled the night, and Steve jumped in. Anything would be better than this place, He tought.
Mountains and plains made of red rock, and lava rivers. This is what steve saw. Beautiful ruins made of a dark, burnt brick. Some sort of white creature, slowly floated by. There were golden creatures, flying by, near the ruins. Burnt skeletons with dark blades crawled trough corridors. Scared, the perfect Steve walked his way back to the portal, but it wasn't there. Someone removed it. Looking at the hot orange lava, a tear could be seen in Steve's face, as he jumped in, full of despair and sadness.
After that, the alien's idea of making a perfect army had faded.
Back at Rethen, the aliens celebrated at their victory, from breaking the portal. The original Steve was still alive. The first Steve. He had a house, a farm, and lived peacefully. The aliens decided that enhancing the Steves was a danger for them. They changed all the clones, locking their arms and mouths. Modifying their faces, so Steve wouldn't recognise them.
The original Steve's memory was erased, and he was released into the bigger and hardest arena they ever made. That arena had dungeons created by the aliens, and some structures where the other abandoned clones could live. But there was a portal to Enderia there. An undestructable portal, created by the past civilizations. The only thing the aliens could to to stop Steve from finding it, was hiding the portal inside an enormous underground castle, full of traps and hidden rooms. But they thought Steve wouldn't find it. He was on the surface, alone. But he would survive. They trusted Steve. They didn't need to enhance him. He was already enhancing himself. There, they could watch him, and see how he would react to every event on the world. There, he would be free. There, he would be Steve.
One day, wandering on a plain, he saw a giant tree. Near that tree, there was a woman, staring at the sky.
These aliens needed better soldiers. They decided to invade Earth, and make an army of genetically modified beings. The experiment worked, but with two problems. The "Ultimate Steve" and Herobrine. Both were too strong, even for the aliens to handle. So, they killed the other clones, and let only one Steve live, the original one.
Just some extra stuff..
Nether: The Nether is Rethen, but in the future. It is like that because they had to destroy their planet, scared of the "Ultimate Steve", Herobrine, and Steve. (Nether = Rehten backwards)
The End: Planet from wich the aliens got the Enderman. The Dragon is "Ultimate Steve". He got out of the Nether, helped by Herobrine, and found the Enderia Portal. He got infected by Ender, wich caused his already modified cells to conflict.
This is it! Don't forget to
!
Comment if you like it too!
Also, help me find typos and errors! Thanks.
Anyways, enjoy!
- We need more soldiers. Better soldiers.
- And how will we get them? Birth rates are lower than ever, sir.
- There must be a way...
- What about Earth sir?
- They're way too weak, aren't they?
- Hmm.. Nothing we can't change. Let's go talk to The Leader.
... Some weeks later ...
After attacking Earth, the aliens captured one human, and one of each animal. They genetically modified these, and released them in an arena around their world. Steve was the human's name.
Steve sat on the ground, near a giant tree, and stared at the sky. He did not know what to do. He had lost his famlily, his house, everything.
"Where am I?" He thought.
"I must do something, I need to find shelter and food."
He got up, and started walking.
The world was very blocky. He couldn't see a single round shape, except himself, and some animals.
The aliens did not like the way Steve and the animals were, so round and curvy. After some dangerous procedures, they were able to "blockify" them. Steve's memory was erased. He was released into a big arena. Their world was called Rehten. It was a gigantic, almost infinite world, made of blocks. They had one natural satellite, and one star on their solar sistem. One of the planets around them, was Enderia. It was a huge mass of white rock, populated by strange and tall humanoids. Other planets arround them were too small and too hot to be populated.
Meanwhile, Steve was getting smarter. He made a grass bed near a lava pool, to protect himself from the cold. He took branches from trees, and used them to protect himself from wild wolves. Steve found apples from trees, fish from lakes, and crops from the ground. Sometimes, at night, Steve would lie on the ground, look up and talk to himself. Then, he would cry.
After some time, fascinated by Steve, the aliens cloned him. The cloning process was already well known by the aliens, so it was an easy and quick process. 49 clones were made.
Some clones were taken by the aliens, and genetically modified. They were made stronger, smarter, faster. More muscle, more brain, more stamina. Better. Each month, they would choose some clones, enhance them, delete their memory and release them in the arenas again.
In one of theese clones, experiments were taken too hard, and he became too strong. Known as Herobrine, this genetic anomally broke out of the labs, and disappeared into the shadows of the night. The last thing the aliens saw, were his white eyes, bright with hate and anger. Underestimating him, the aliens didn't chase him, thinking he would perish from the cold night, starve to death, or be killed by wolves.
Their plan was working. The Steves were even stronger, starting to explore, hunt, and mine. They were too strong, and nothing was on their way. Yet. The aliens went hunting on other planets, looking for possible enemies for the Steves. They brought back Creepers, Giant Spiders, and Endermen. They also made new enemies from old, dead corpses. They armed skeletons with bows, and some zombies with swords and shovels.
After some time, the perfect Steve was created. He was strong, intelligent, and fast. He solved all their speed tests, endurance tests, and intelligence testa. Sadly for the aliens, this perfect Steve didn't want to obey them. In the middle of the last tests, he broke out and ran. On his way out, from small windows, he could see shiny, beautiful ores he had never seem before. He tried breaking the glass, but it didn't work. At the end of the corridor, there was a door. He heard footsteps. He ran to the door, and kicked it open.
After walking trough it, Steve found himself in beautiful world, full of animals he was familiar with. He ran to the woods, scared by the tought of a potential chase. He didn't want to be on that planet. He wanted to escape. After several days, he found a shiny rock, dark as the night. Breaking it with his bare hands, he made a doorway with those rocks, and using some flint and stone, he lit it. The purple light filled the night, and Steve jumped in. Anything would be better than this place, He tought.
Mountains and plains made of red rock, and lava rivers. This is what steve saw. Beautiful ruins made of a dark, burnt brick. Some sort of white creature, slowly floated by. There were golden creatures, flying by, near the ruins. Burnt skeletons with dark blades crawled trough corridors. Scared, the perfect Steve walked his way back to the portal, but it wasn't there. Someone removed it. Looking at the hot orange lava, a tear could be seen in Steve's face, as he jumped in, full of despair and sadness.
After that, the alien's idea of making a perfect army had faded.
Back at Rethen, the aliens celebrated at their victory, from breaking the portal. The original Steve was still alive. The first Steve. He had a house, a farm, and lived peacefully. The aliens decided that enhancing the Steves was a danger for them. They changed all the clones, locking their arms and mouths. Modifying their faces, so Steve wouldn't recognise them.
The original Steve's memory was erased, and he was released into the bigger and hardest arena they ever made. That arena had dungeons created by the aliens, and some structures where the other abandoned clones could live. But there was a portal to Enderia there. An undestructable portal, created by the past civilizations. The only thing the aliens could to to stop Steve from finding it, was hiding the portal inside an enormous underground castle, full of traps and hidden rooms. But they thought Steve wouldn't find it. He was on the surface, alone. But he would survive. They trusted Steve. They didn't need to enhance him. He was already enhancing himself. There, they could watch him, and see how he would react to every event on the world. There, he would be free. There, he would be Steve.
One day, wandering on a plain, he saw a giant tree. Near that tree, there was a woman, staring at the sky.
These aliens needed better soldiers. They decided to invade Earth, and make an army of genetically modified beings. The experiment worked, but with two problems. The "Ultimate Steve" and Herobrine. Both were too strong, even for the aliens to handle. So, they killed the other clones, and let only one Steve live, the original one.
Just some extra stuff..
Nether: The Nether is Rethen, but in the future. It is like that because they had to destroy their planet, scared of the "Ultimate Steve", Herobrine, and Steve. (Nether = Rehten backwards)
The End: Planet from wich the aliens got the Enderman. The Dragon is "Ultimate Steve". He got out of the Nether, helped by Herobrine, and found the Enderia Portal. He got infected by Ender, wich caused his already modified cells to conflict.
This is it! Don't forget to
!Comment if you like it too!
Also, help me find typos and errors! Thanks.
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After two months, results are out! : by JoaoPauloC100 12/15/2014 2:30:03 pmDec 15th, 2014
Just updating this. I fixed a lot of the typos, formatted it a bit more. I wish the judges would say where I can improve, but oh well. Thanks for reading.
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