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The Story of Enderhart - The Beginning [PROTOTYPE]

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So this is a fairly old "prototype" version of a story that I am in the planning phase of creating, something different from the things I have seen of other peoples stories and things, This story which I class now as a prototype is an older version of the beginning point of the plot and how everything began except the newer version will be completely different in terms of the end part of this older version, to give a taster: Sowhart (The Main character or Me essentially) becomes infected rather then instantly transformed into The Enderhart and he is slowly being consumed with an unknown infection that will eventually turn him into The Enderhart unless he manages to do something about it! That is all I will tease, I hope you enjoy reading this version and hope to see the new version in the future!
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This is my first Blog type thing so please forgive me if I make any mistakes but feel free to tell me of anything I could improve. Thank you! =)

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"The Story of Enderhart"

This is the story (of a video idea I had for a while) of 'Enderhart', How I became this demonic like half form of myself and of an Enderman, Forced into pain and nightmares, being controlled by another.
This is how to happened:

I lived in a small village out in the wilderness and everyone called me by the name 'Sowhart' (Off topic a bit but if anyone is wondering, It is pronounced "So'w" not "S'ow", anyway back to the story) and I was the son of the village Blacksmith, My father would help the village defenses and protect everyone from the horrors of the night, but he couldn't do this alone, he had me by his side to help out and I always was quite the Spelunker as I was told many times, I would mostly come back from a good day of mining with all sorts of useful materials to work with,
But after one trip, Everything changed.

I was always the first person out to the mines in the village, and on this dark morning I once again was, I had everything with me that was necessary and was ready to venture back down into the mines.
Though something felt a bit odd, I had a strange feeling as if I didn't want to go down there again, It was strange because I always loved to be mining all the time. I shock the idea off and went down and ended up going to my usual place in the mines, A large cave of sorts where I could mine away at the stone and ores without any trouble, The caves themselves were always chilly and cold and I had the sense of being deep underground but on this particular trip something again was wrong and strange in my eyes, while I was mining at a large stone wall I was sure that the room was getting warmer and warmer as I dug deeper in, though its the kind of feeling a person like me would get being down in the depths of the Earth for a long period of time.

As I continued to mine deeper I felt as if the stone was getting harder to mine out, I soon had realized that not only this but it seemed like I had discovered a new kind of material, I couldn't describe it, It was dark and purple like obsidian but softer and with more of a lighter tint to it, I thought that maybe it could be useful for my father back up in the Blacksmith so I decided to collect some of it just in case but after a good five or ten minutes of mining the stuff I had seemed to have punched a hole through into some sort of strange of cavern, it was nothing like anything I had seem, I had heard tales of a place known as a Stronghold but I was told that they were made up of a kind of stone brick, this however was made up for the dark kind of stone I was previously mining except they look to be much stronger and heavier, The place itself was dark and bleak and I could hardly see a thing, even when I tried to shine a light with a torch it was like the light was being sucked out the torch and back into the dark essence that was surrounding the place.

I ventured in out of curiosity, into the darkness, I was a bit worried as of what I might come across as this was nothing like I had ever seen before and it felt too quiet, almost completely silent. I still couldn't see where I was standing so in order to navigate around the strange place I had to use multiple torches to get a very quick glimpse of what was ahead of me, but it wasn't the greatest of use.
I was really curios as of what this place was, why it was here and what I might discover but there were so many questions that I just couldn't lay my mind on any thoughts and while I was wandering around I noticed a dim purpleish light glowing deep within the cavern, what could it be? I had no idea and I wanted to know what could be omitting that aura, So I traveled deeper and closer to the light being careful of where I was walking, I didn't know what might be underneath me.

After a while of walking I came to the source of the purple glow, I found myself in a smaller compact circular structured cave of sorts and in the middle I saw this beautiful purple like gem, this was what was omitting the light and it felt like it belonged here as any other source of light that entered the place was immediately sucked away.
Being a person to gather all sorts of materials for use, I was a bit picky, I wanted this gem but something in my mind was trying to stop me from getting it, as I reached out to nab it the gem started to release a dark purple kind of gas around it and the light got brighter and when I placed my hand upon the gem stone, I felt a strong pain go through my body and I fell to the ground in shock as the gem smashed itself into pieces, I felt like my body was being taken over from the amount of pain circulating through me, I black out.

I don't know how long I was out for but when I came too I felt different, I felt stronger, powerful and quick, I could also see through darkness as if it were light. I looked at my body and I noticed my hands were partly purplish and dark, half of my clothing and skin had gone through a dark transformation, I tried to move but I couldn't.
I wasn't in control of my body anymore and this thing that had taken over me was now my mind, my soul, my thoughts and it could do what it wanted.

A tragic event happened to my home village, whatever was in control of me unleashed hell and suffering onto my home, everything was destroyed, everyone living there had to evacuate from their homes.

All except my father. He tried to stop the demon that was doing this but when he noticed that it was in control of my body, he couldn't attack no matter how much he tried, he should have gone with the rest but he stayed and from that all, he was killed by the demon inside.

I have nothing left in me, They came for me.
The Enderman inside of me.
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Thank you for reading this, this being my first blog and I know it wasn't the best story but I am not great at making stories. =)
If you enjoyed this please consider leaving a diamond and post a comment about what you thought about this story and what you could say to improve it, Feedback is appreciated! =3
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07/25/2014 8:45 am
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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Is it just me, or is
the entire first paragraph of the story one sentence....?  It was a little
hard for me to read.

 "I shock the idea off" do you see it?

Overall, I noticed that you usually only have 1-2 sentences in a paragraph,
really, really long sentences, that are not necessary. Unlike most people on
PMC though, your phrasing is beautiful, like you really know what you’re
talking about! I love that! This was one of those stories that made you
want to read more, where you really wondered what was going to happen next. That
ending, that ending was just magnificent....beautiful... over all, I love
it! Diamond favorite and subscribe for you sir!  
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07/25/2014 8:53 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Network
The_Sowhart
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Thank you :) Glad you liked it, Yeah it wasn't the best thing ever but as I said at the top part when I updated this post, I'm actually working on a re-worked story that is a full story instead which I'm hoping to eventually turn into a full machinima series in the future. I've been wanting to get into more story writing and I'm planning on another few stories to work on in my spare time :D


Thanks for subscribing :3
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07/25/2014 8:55 am
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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your very welcome! i cannot wait! As a writer i admire your abilty to touch people with this story... still amazing
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07/25/2014 9:04 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Network
The_Sowhart
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Thank you, I'm just happy that someone enjoyed reading this haha ;P
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11/08/2013 5:49 pm
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EndTEmpire
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Wow. Nicce job! I'm speechless. . .
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11/09/2013 2:37 am
Level 15 : Journeyman Network
The_Sowhart
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Thanks!
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