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The story of Steve (for the contest)

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TheCreeperQueen's Avatar TheCreeperQueen
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One day Steve was outside with his pet wolf when woosh he heard a sound, woosh there it was again and again!
He sprinted to the nearest cave he saw and peeked out to see the Ender Dragon being ridden by the Mutant Ender Queen!
Horrified he watched as his family and his friends were killed by the Ender dragon.
1 day later the Ender dragon was gone so he ran out of the cave with his pet woof to see if anyone was still alive.
First he went to his house and found no one alive, at the next house he found his best friend and his family laying cold and dead on the ground. At the last house he was confronted by a zombie. It was the first one he had ever seen, because before the Ender Dragon came everyone was at peace, terrified Steve ran back to the cave (which already had torches in it because of mining).
Soon the full relization hit him, he was all alone in the world against monsters and only his pet wolf, Oreo as company.
How could he survive when he didnt know a thing about the basics of living alone?

                                      Weeks later...
Steve now knew the basics and more, so he decided to take revenge on the ender dragon and the ender queen.
Steve left Oreo in the home cave and went deep down to mine. First he found iron,then days later he found diamonds!
Steve ran back home and was able to craft full iron armor and a diamond sword. 5 days later he went back down to find diamonds for a diamond pickaxe and this time he brought a crafting table with him. After 9 long days of mining he uncovered 6 diamonds!
He was able to craft a pickaxe and have extra diamonds. Dashing back home to Oreo he thought about how much he had learned 
in the past weeks since the ender dragon had come and realized that the new Steve was better, way better. Steves no longer lived in peace and harmony, so they were forced to think, learn and survive on there own. When he got there he showed Oreo and Oreo sat up and barked a bark of joy. Steve went back down for obsidian, but this time with Oreo. 1 day later they came across a lava patch and they poured water over it and *fizzle* *fizzle* it turned to obsidian. Steve quickly mined it up and then he and Oreo dashed back up the path to home only to encounter a creeper. They did not see the creeper untill they were very close.
Steve started backing up and readying his sword for a strike when Oreo pounced on the creeper and *boom* *boom* the creeper blew up leaving a dead Oreo and a wounded Steve. Crying, Steve raced home. Steve cryed for days on end his only companion and his best friend had just died before his very eyes.
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10/03/2014 9:31 am
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GeniusGuy21
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10/03/2014 10:57 am
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TheCreeperQueen
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okay thanks
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10/02/2014 11:31 pm
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GeniusGuy21
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Its alright, but there are some stories that are thoroughly thought out. Put some more effort into the piece and use higher vocabulary because the best word you used was "confronted."
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10/03/2014 8:44 am
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TheCreeperQueen
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Ok.
Thanks I guess I forgot about vocabulary.
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10/01/2014 10:07 pm
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StingRay_FTW
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No offence but I'm gonna give you ways to improve the story 1.how long did it take to make it 5 minutes?you really have to spend time on projects to make them good 2.I don't really get it 3.maybe try changing some things 4.make it longer it's too short. NO OFFENCE!I JUST WANT TO HELP YOU IMPROVE YOUR STORY!THIS IS NOT HATE!ill give you a diamond to help you out.
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10/01/2014 10:08 pm
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TheCreeperQueen
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Thanks for diamond and the advice.
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