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This strange, new world...

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Khanz avatar Khanz
Level 25 : Expert Dragonborn
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August 12th, unknown year.

I woke up on a island, where everything seemed so strange. Everything was blocky, I was shocked at first, thinking I was dreaming. I did not remember most things, where I came from, who I am, and how I ended up here. I went off exploring, and found out I had to jump over these blocks that were the size of half of my body. I also looked blocky, I don't know why. Am I dead? Is this heaven? Or purgatory? Anyway, I should rest. I have found this big tree, and somehow, by just punching it, I got through the leaves. I tried to lie down, but I couldn't. So I just stood and fell asleep, because it didn't feel uncomfortable for some reason.

August 13th, unknown year.

I am awake now, and writing in my little notebook I had in my pocket. I am going to explore more of this strange world. Last night was strange though, I could hear some moanings and bone clackering, but it was probably only my imagination generated by my shock. I tried punching things, and found out I can easily break them. So I gathered some wood and made a little house. I found some caves, but I don't think I am ready to explore them. I don't know what this world is yet. It's getting dark, I should go asleep.

August 14th, unknown year.

I found something on the island now, animals. They came in groups and walked randomly around and stared at me... it felt strange. Some would even walk off a cliff, and die. I could even just punch them to death. They were all blocky too. I made some tools out of the wood and I got some food and leather. I made some leather clothing for me and a wooden pickaxe which I later got some stone to make a sword with. I was ready to explore deeper into the caves. I heard some more moaning, and instantly ran in fear. I should rest, that thing could be after me and the safest place to be is my house.

August 15th, unknown year.

I am exploring the caves again, and I hear no moanings now, I found some iron and coal, which I don't know what I can use them for. I went deeper in until there was a dead end. I returned to the surface, and found out it was dark. I was headed for my house, until I heard a "Ssssss..." sound, turned around, and I saw this green figure, without any arms. Just four legs. It explodes and I fall back. Strangely, I didn't fall down, and my limbs were all just intact. I just felt hungry, so I went and ate the pork I got from the pig. Once again, it is getting dark. I am going to sleep now.

August 16th, unknown year.

I am still freaked out about yesterday, so I decided to not explore the caves. I went out early in the morning, and then I saw fire, and what seemed to be a skeleton holding a bow, I was shocked, but I could see it was jumping around and then died, so I went and picked up things. I found an arrow and two bones. Later today, I found a wolf companion. He stared at me, and since I had bones, I thought I would give some to him. Later, he started following me and looked much friendlier and had a red collar. I called him Pablo. We hunted some pigs together, then it got late and we went asleep.

August 17th, unknown year.

Yesterday night Pablo died. I woke up, to see a green human, attacking me, reaching for my brains, me and Pablo fought back, but then the thing killed Pablo, and I took my sword and tried to decapitate it, but it just fell and with a POOF, disappeared with some smoke. Pablo had saved my life. I felt sad over his death. I chose to move to a safer area and I decided to live underground.

August 18th, unknown year.

I am wounded and I just ran away from some skeletons with bows. I don't know if I can take this anymore! This place is probably hell or purgatory. I lost Pablo, everything is blocky, there are monsters outside, the animals are creepy and stupid and... it's just simply scary and strange! What is this! What have I done to deserve this?!

August 21th, unknown year.

Living underground has made me insane...! I CAN'T KEEP EATING THESE MUSROOMSSS-.,o
i Am losing contrOl of my HansD... I can't type properly because of the pain. Why me? Why do this?
No...

ByE..!?!!.._

August 24th. 2032

I am a by-passer, a survivor, explorer. I found his dead body, and his notebook here. He seemed to have jumped off a cliff. He also left a note, saying "See you in heaven, Pablo!". I believe he has commited suicide. It seems like he couldn't take it. I will be taking this notebook, and keep it. Or, actually, I think i'll send it through this mystical portal, hoping that I can get someone to find it. If someone finds this, please share this and let him be remembered.

The end.

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In case you are wondering why his notebook keeps switching before presence and the past, is because he writes it in different times. Like in the Pablo deaths thing, it had happened, and he didn't write it down yet, he was probably crying. While exploring, he probably writes down what he finds while he goes.

I would also like feedback on my story, what you liked and if you found any spelling or grammar errors. I would also like suggestions for another story, and if I should make another one.
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12/19/2011 1:40 pm
Level 22 : Expert Miner
pengy329
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This is like some thing that i saw. NEAT
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11/19/2011 4:33 am
Level 16 : Journeyman Nerd
gogocp
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Cool!
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11/14/2011 6:27 pm
Level 22 : Expert Dragonborn
GoldVlad
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This ROCKS!! I love it man, you gotta keep it up! Make a Part 2: The Nether!
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10/13/2011 11:20 am
Level 16 : Journeyman Nerd
gogocp
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Cool Ssssssstuff. *Explodes*
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09/08/2011 5:02 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Engineer
piemanjake97
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OMG THAT SSSSSSSSSSSS EPIC!!!!
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09/06/2011 1:22 pm
Level 23 : Expert Explorer
RoughSpirit
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Maybe part two would be like he goes to the nether or something. But ya this was one of the BEST things I've read this year. lol
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08/27/2011 6:12 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Narwhal
Butter_Toast
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This story made me not wanting to go to The World of Minecraft... lol
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08/28/2011 4:39 am
Level 1 : New Miner
jackthelad00
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Well GET BACK ON IT :D MINECRAFTS WAITING FOR ALL OF YOU :D:D:d
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08/27/2011 2:58 pm
Level 26 : Expert Geek
ironiczz
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that was probably the best story i've heard on this site for a long time. would love to see a part two :D
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08/30/2011 1:01 pm
Level 25 : Expert Dragonborn
Khanz
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I don't really know how there could be a part 2... I could perhaps continue the explorer's story. I'll start thinking of another story later this week. Would you like to be informed when it is out? :)
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