You shiver in your cage of ice - despite your long fur.... Why oh why did you need to go out of the border! You look down at the snow below your paws. Was this a trap set by Silentstar? No.... it can't be.... He's not that sinister. You suddenly look up as you see a outline of another cat. "Help! This ice suddenly surrounded me when I stepped outside the border!" you yowl. "Why did you step outside the border then?" Says a cold, deep but slightly kit-like voice. That isn't anyone you know! "Haven't  you heard of me?" The cold voice asks. A cat with icy blue eyes and strange blue markings steps trough the ice. Memories flood trough your mind as you remember your days sitting in the elder's den as a kit listeniing to storys. "Turmoilkit" you murmur. The blue cat frowns at me then says, "I guess.... That is what Cinderstar named me before he killed me" your whiskers twitch in surprize "Cinderstar..... Killed you? And named you Turmoilkit? The Elders always said he exiled you after you killed your littermate.... but I guess that is pretty bad...." Turmoilkit's fur suddenly bristles "I would never kill Thornkit!" She hisses in a deeper darker voise than before "She was the only one who stood up for me!" You back away suddenly "c-c-an you tell me when really happed?" you say - unable to hide your curiosity. Turmoilkit sighs, fur retunting to normal, "Fine." -=Story shifts to Turmoilkit's point of veiw=-
proooof! I can suddenly hear and see! I blink awake looking around me.... a white cat with a black tail-tip and ears has my mother's warm milky scent and a black-and-white patched kit holds the scent of my sibling. "Mama?" I blurt out. Oh so embarrasing! "Its Dawnshadow dear and yes im your mother" I look at her cheerfully, and she looks back.... a confused expression on her face. "Your name is Frostkit." she says I look at her cheerfully and then at my brother, "Im Thornkit!" He purrs and I lick him on the face.
*-*-*A week goes by*-*-*
I step outside the nursery for the first time and blink. Its not much lighter than in the nursery out here. I look around me, There are cats everywere.... and they are ALL stareing at me! I quickly lick my blue-pattered fur. A veeery large grey and black tom looks down at me. I couldn't help but shrink under his stare. I feel a surge of power and bright fluffy snow showers down around us. The Tom looks at the snow and glares at me. Dawnshadow suddenly gets up beside me. "Frostkit this is Cinderstar your leader. Its time to get back in the nursery." She says hastily, dragging me back inside. When we got to our nest she glared at me. "What. Did. You. Do." She hisses calmly "I made snow fall Dawnshadow." I say. "Why." she hisses again "The scene needed to be lighter." I say "Cinderstar was glareing at me.... and Dawnshadow? Why was no-one elses fur blue?" I ask. My mother hisses again then turns away to start grooming Thornkit.

I soon realise (after a couple times out of the nursery) that absoloutly NO-ONE likes me. Exept for Thornkit of course! The only time I felt I truly belonged in the clan was when I was with Thornkit. I still had one cat I had the sliiiightest hope for, that he might like me.... was my father. As he was away, on a trip to the mountains, and wouldn't be back untill I was neary a apprentice, There was no way for me to know..... but I saw how the other kit's fathers played with their kits.... That was all I wanted.... my father to love me....

Thornkit suddenly pounces on me! "Oooof" I mew. I make some snow under me and secretly toss some of it on my brother's belly. "AH!" he squeaks! and then bursts into giggles. I toss a feathery soft snowball at him and Thornkit catches it in his mouth.... Instantly melting it! "mmmmmmm" He giggles "Magic snow tastes good!" I laugh and am about to trow another snowball when Dawnshadow picks Thornkit up by the scruff and takes him back into the nursery. "Come Frostkit" She says coldly. I lower my tail and follow.

-=Is suddenly 2 months old=-

I sighed as I woke up. Another day of being ignored. I slowly knead my dirty old moss nest. I was starting to think the apprentices either didn't want to change my bedding, or it was an order from Cinderstar. I was sick of Cinderstar. Wouldn't I be a good fighter in battle because of my powers? Then I suddenly thought of something... THIS clan didn't want me..... How about another clan? I slowly creep out of the nursery and sit down in the center of camp to think up my plan.... To escape cinderclan.

I sneak around to the camp enterence, no-one has noticed me yet... I take my first step out of camp. The dazzleing sunlight hits my face for the first time... I blink a couple times to try and get use to the sunlight.... I felt like I belonged out here! I set off in a random direction, hoping with all my heart it is twords the Flareclan border... 

My small legs soon get tired so I use my powers as an advantage most kits don't have! I glided along on my drift of snow... This is the way to travel! But just then - a shadow suddenly loomed over me... Then all was black.

-= 4 months! =-

I was awoken by Dawnshadow's harsh hiss "Frostkit, the elders have ticks." Ever since I tryed to escape, Cinderstar has put me to careing for the elders, as a way of 'punishment' truthfully..... I thought he wanted to anyway.  I padded over to the medicine at den and sure enough,  Briarbee had the mouse bile ready for me. I sighed and took it to the elders den. And then.... I saw  him.... My father... Leading his patroll into camp!

I forget the mouse-bile and race over to my father... "FATHER" I squeak happily, My dad looks at me with his frosty eyes that match mine... I see a few expresions cross his face, Joy, pride, sorrow, resentment.... his face finally settled on hatred.... I look down....  knowing.... the one cat I counted on loveing me... hated me... "Go away you disgracefull kit. You should treat your deputy with more respect." he said coldly.

-=5 months....=-

I drag my paws over to the center of camp to my own little 'prey' pile. Cinderstar decided, since I can make snow, I must survive solely on snow to 'help' my powers not need to bother with any blood. I was now growing as skinny as a cat could get, and my powers were weakening. I take a mouthfull of snow as I see Cinderstar leap onto the Dark-ledge. "Clanmates, It has come to my attention that a kit died this morning." Cinderstar states. I start to shiver.... I hadn't seen Thornkit all morning! Cinderstar pulls a limp, black and white body up by the scruff, were all could see...... Thornkit was dead..... "I know who killed Thornkit" My father- echem no Silentstripe growls. "It was Frostkit." He hissses. "Yeessss! She's always been jealus of Thornkit!" another cat hissses. "I Agreeeeessss! A kit's death must be punished... by a kitssss death!" yet another cat yowled. A couple more cats hissed their agreement. I back away from the angry clan...... but Cinderstar was too fast for me..... he pinned me down a yowled for all cats to hear........ "Before I kill this trator, I shall rename her Turmoilkit! As a permanent reminder of her trechorous ways as she rots in the Lava Forest where she can be with other cats like her! I'm sure CrystalClan approves of my choice!" Almost the whole clan yowled in agreement.... then I felt a shearing pain in my neck and gave one... last.... yowl..... then all was black....

I blink my eyes and realize im see-thru.... I look down and see my body. Various tears and bites and chunks of flesh missing... Cinderclan's way of treating trators..... "It is time." Cinderstar growls... The elders pick up my battered body and walk out of camp with it. I find me, and the rest of my clan, following. Cinderstar stood over my dead body, Tearing a chunck off and eating it ( atablers note (im pink, Turmoilkit is blue): So, wait, Cinderstar is a canibal? No, Its just part of the *Gulps* killing cerimony) He then tossed me into the river, that flows into Wolf-terrirory....

My ghost hung around Cinderclan camp for awhile, assuming the wolves hadn't gotten my body yet, I waited for someone in Crystalclan to come and take me.

-= 3 Hours Later=-

I decided I'd find my own way to Crystalclan! I floated away into the sky, searching for the 'Dazzlepool' she had heard the Medicine-cat chat to other cats about it, "It is a pool, deep purple in color, and star-coverd, There is a deep cave, but I can always tell what cave holds the Dazzlepool by the biggest star that floats over it." It didn't take long for me to spot it, I flew over to it, quick as anything, and raced down into the tunnel, I soon found that deep purple pool, stars and all, and submerged my whole body into it, a tingleing sensation..... then BLACK




I woke with starry cats, Muttering and whispering in a circle around me, I wonderd why my pelt wasnt starry yet, just see-tru.... "I'm here to join Crystalclan!" I squeaked! "You were killed by Cinderstar." a cat, a tad more shadow-ish than the others hissed. "Cinderstar dispises me. Just becase of my powers! You'd think i'd be stonger in battle becase of my powers but NO! He had to go and kill the only cat who liked me and blame me for it! Why Crystalclan cats? WHY!?" I found myself telling them everything...... "You saw.... didn't you? Cinderstar killing my sister?" I asked, with all the hope in my heart. The cats shook their heads.... The shadowy cat's head stayed still. "You belong in the Lava-Forest with the rest of the murderers." He growled "I saw YOU kill thornkit.... and now your hopeing for a place in paridise!" "No... no... you have it allo wrong...." snow fell everywhere and I found myself on the outskirts of Cinderclan teritory.... Rage filled my heart and I vowed to kill every Cinderclan cat I could.... I couldn't get inside the territory so, I made camp right where I found myself....



=-Normal again xD-=

"So you see foolish cat.... I Have to kill you....." The bluecat's eyes soften "welll.... maybe I don't NEED to kill you.... just spread the word of my story...." a single spike of ice is lowered and race back into Cinderclan territory, and quick as can be...


               The End