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kenworld1's Avatar kenworld1
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So this is the first poem to actually have a title! yay! Well, me and my bestest friend lily wanted to make a poem with me. This poem is more her type of style, but im glad i was a part of it's making. enjoy! :{D


I hear your name everyday, so manny things i want to say, us sounds great but in your heart i see hate, im scared that its to late. i just want to set things strait, ive set the bait, but you are to good at your game you take the bait. and leave me open and in pain ive tried talking to you but my words are nothing and slip away. like sand through fingers my love still lingers around my head with things i should have said my eyes are bloodshot red. from the continuing tears reality is now the dawning of all my fears i wish for the time when everything clears. when your hand nears, when im truely fine, when your mine but i whisk it away, because i know you wont allow a clean slate. why cant you see our lovely fate or is it just me wishing again for a range of delicate change i guess feelings grew, but im unwanted its true, another thing that i knew, the same goes for you.


Hmmmm what a lovely poem wasn't it? im sorry if its formatting is a bit confusing, she was the one typing it down so i only had the words and not the exact rythem of it. Though i am sure this is how the poem goes. (during reading it to put the punctuation in it, i was reading it as like i was singing a song.) I will put a picture on later. It's 4:07 am, and if your lucky, i may draw it myself instead of the other poem pictures. usually the poems are my feelings, but i had to dig into hers for this.

Ps. thank you for reading.
PPss. Omg i have 14 subs, i thought i was gonna be like one of those crazy cat ladies that has no living relatives, only pmc style!
PPPSSS. later today i will be posting (yet another) poem.
CreditLily because without her (and me), this wouldn't exist, yet one or two things in its like-ness
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11/10/2012 1:47 am
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XThrowDown Trisha
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Make more :D
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11/10/2012 2:53 am
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kenworld1
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I don't know if we would make more, because i don't think that i could make the sadd poems by myself. Although, if you'd like, i may be able to make more of the happier poems.
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11/11/2012 4:09 am
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XThrowDown Trisha
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does not have to be sad lol :)
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11/10/2012 1:47 am
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XThrowDown Trisha
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This amazing u tell i said that :D and wow ur so talented :)
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11/10/2012 2:54 am
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kenworld1
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ehhh, truthfully, i didn't even know that i write stuff well... now, if only i instantly learn how to draw well...
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11/11/2012 4:10 am
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XThrowDown Trisha
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Drawing is fun + easy trust me :)
i draw my drawing out of fellings lol. :)
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11/11/2012 4:34 am
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kenworld1
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if i drew from my feelings, i don't know what i would get...
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11/11/2012 4:38 am
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XThrowDown Trisha
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it what i do lol u can do what u like :P lol...
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10/31/2012 10:24 pm
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DinoWolf
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Whos Lily? :3
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11/01/2012 7:57 am
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kenworld1
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oh, lily is my emo-ish friend that goes to a school across from mine. we rarely ever see eachother, except she comes over to our school's parking lot to ride the bus home. i kinda have/had a crush on her, i told her i liketo make poems. So she decided that we willmake a poem together, but it had to be about what she wanted (because i didn't know what it should be about). she doesn't play mineraft, nor get on pmc.

Ps. Its nice to see that you are un-something-ed, untempbaned? Well nice to see you un temporary banned.
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