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avatar Devi The Panda
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
These visions are getting worse each night.
They seem only like nightmares but they feel, seem, act so real.
A figure that looks exactly like me but has an ability to- take shape of people I've seen, things I've seen.

It calls out my name from echoing tunnels that my visions place me in and I can hear the eternal footsteps stamping on the wet floor getting closer and or farther from me. But yet, I can't seem to move or talk in these states of vision.

Other times I'd see a small skinny girl with her neck dangling behind her back with cuts on her arms and stomach. She'd be seen in a place I recall but can't remember. A place so peaceful at one time I'm sure of but now only flooded by the blood of her image.

She whispers through the thickening fog that shrouds her being; whispering the same sentence every time.
"Shush little child don't you cry, mother's here to sing you a lullaby. When you wake you will for sake, be free of those bloodied knives of mine."

Over and over she whispers that saying with no breaths in between nor pauses.
when she does look at me- she looks through me as if I were nothing but a mist.
Then- she'd scream.

Another vision I have recently been forced to repeat for the last four or five days straight is one of a- He has no- Has no body.
No body that would be considered human that is.
A tall- disfigured- it nearly looks like a puppet if you may say.
He stands over me when I'm in bed when these visions happen.
his head dangles over me looking deeply into my eyes like he's trying to tell me something.
His arms dangling by a vein or two- they'd move as if they were on strings.
His arm that is nearly all there keeps running up and down the side of my bed yet he does nothing else but stare.
His face is what is a bit unsettling though. The man has no head- I mean he does just not a full one. He wears a mask made of sheep skin and boar fur with a human eye hanging from the socket. The mask looks like a hockey mask to be honest. The other eye is nothing but a hollowed out piece of flesh.
His actual head- It looks like someone took a shotgun to it by shoving the barrel in it's mouth and blowing it's head apart.

I was released from the vision before I heard him speak.
He called out for my son, Daniel.
I'm afraid of these things and I wish I could stop having these visions. Some of them bring me to tears while others may cause me to lash out in rage. My wife took Daniel away from me because of my temper, but she doesn't know the truth behind these events.

I would end it if I could.
Just to make it quiet again.

~Larson J.H.

Thank you for reading Please leave feedback to further help my
writing experience or this story. Criticism is much appreciated

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CreditThanks Justin Gedak for the picture

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11/08/2017 8:50 am
Level 30 : Artisan Architect

6-15-18 7-9-22-5 13-5 12-15-18-4 7-15-4
"Forgive me, Lord, God!"

"I seak for help, but how long can I suffer for?"

Was this still part of the story?
11/08/2017 9:22 am
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
Devi The Panda
You know too much D: also dear lord I forgot about these messages...
11/08/2017 9:27 am
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
Haha, oh dear! Cryptographic messages, once lost in time, but now finally unravelled! How very exciting! :p
11/08/2017 9:44 am
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
Devi The Panda
Also no the messages at the end weren't apart of the story.
07/19/2016 10:51 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Warrior


I cried while reading this ;-;
07/19/2016 11:19 pm
Level 36 : Artisan Button Pusher
Devi The Panda
^.^ Yay I made someone cry from reading something that I cried to writing xD

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