Minecraft / Blogs

What If I Told You? | TheSilentWind

  • 8
  • 4
  • comment12
  • playlist_add
  • share
  • more_horiz
avatar TheSilentWind
Level 43 : Master Enderdragon
What if I told you that I did something wrong?
If I did, would you tell me to be gone?
What if I told you that I’ve been tortured by my mind?
Would you think what I did was it fine?

Every moment I'd make countless mistakes,
If you knew it all, how much more could you take?
Despite that I've never betrayed you, I'd never be good enough for you,
In your eyes, I seemed perfect, but perhaps not if you knew.

Why must I replay my every mistake in my mind,
As though there was a hidden meaning for me to find?
Countless times I’ve hinted to you to what I have tried to confess,
But I have never got the courage to admit the creation of my mess.

If I told you, perhaps you might find it stupid,
But every time I got close to you, I’m muted.
What if I did have the courage to tell you with my voice?
What if I could stop thinking about my mistakes by choice?

How could I be freed from eternal guilt?
Despite my mistakes being small. My confidence began to wilt.
Many small mistakes accreted,
I overthink but I could imagine that you’d forgive me. I hope that confessions were not needed.

Why it's okay that you can't make pitch-perfect decisions
Credithttps://st3.depositphotos.com/6581660/19065/v/600/depositphotos_190659146-stock-video-sad-girl-near-window-is.jpg was Used for the Original Thumbnail Image.

Comments : 12

star Login or register to post a comment.

Show Comments

1 - 12 of 12

If you didn't read the tags, then I'd like to put a disclaimer out there: Yes, it's fictional.
  • KiddNether
  • Level 15
  • Journeyman Engineer
  • June 24, 2018, 11:43 am
The 1st and 3rd one are relatable.
  • CHorse
  • Level 36
  • Artisan Fish
  • June 23, 2018, 4:54 pm
Tis neat but I kinda felt like the half-rhymes and interruptions of the rhythm ruined it for me :/
Aw, sorry ;c I don't really do rhythm lol.
  • CHorse
  • Level 36
  • Artisan Fish
  • June 25, 2018, 12:52 pm
Okers; well nice attempt but not me thing.
It's okay, we are all entitled to our own opinions, and we don't and won't like the same things :)
  • CHorse
  • Level 36
  • Artisan Fish
  • June 26, 2018, 2:05 am
Wow! Just the first couple words touched me.
This is truely amazing! I'm exited to see more of your beautiful, touching work! <3

Aww, thank you c:

If you wish, you can go to my profile page to find my other content.
  • Sixshot
  • Level 5
  • Apprentice Engineer
  • June 21, 2018, 5:57 am
Yeah that sounds like a personal problem, go ahead and blog that.
Thank you for your time, but please do not assume. No, it isn't. It's a poem. It does have the tag "Fictional" if you look at the tags. In addition, on my about page, I stated: "my emotional content such as poems and stories are usually fictional unless I stated otherwise."

But thanks for reading nevertheless. Have a nice day! :) <3
  • BioPowered
  • Level 41
  • Master Engineer
  • June 21, 2018, 1:07 am
Regrets, I've had a few
But then again, too few to mention
-Frank Sinatra

1 - 12 of 12

Show Comments

Planet Minecraft



© 2010 - 2019