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Why Steve Is The Only Human Left In Minecraft

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MammedZ
Level 40 : Master Architect
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Once upon a time there was a Boy called Steve was s son of King Steve And Queen Steven the King Steve was so Happy When he was Borned But As he was the only son of King And Queen they spoiled this So bad That they gave him what he wanted Steve Asked for Iron they gsve him Iron But One day when he was A Teenager he Asked for 12 stacks of 64 Diamonds the King Said to the miners to find 12 stacks of 64 Diamonds and the miners went to find Diamonds but they could only find 2 satcks of Diamonds. The King Told Them to go find more but they could'nt.

After 4 Day they could Only find 1 more stacks of Diamonds But They tryed to find as many Diamonds they can.Then The King and Queen Went to help the miners and Locked Steve in a Secret Room were he was safe and King Said : Don't open the The door and Don't get out of this room, Steve Said : Ok Dad.Then The King And Queen went but 4 Days past the King And Queen never came back. Steve Started Hering Creeper Blasting Slowelly They Blasted the Whole Castil Away But Steve was still safe. After Steve Went Outside he saw that the whole Castil was blowed Away And no one was in The village. He felt Sacred But then he took Leather armor and wooden Sword and went to find his Parents he followed the Rails that were Going Inside and deep Under ground Then He found a chest and he saw that There Was a book and he read the book And it said that there were 6 satcks of Diamonds Left. Then he went more deep in Ground And found Many Skeletons lying around andhe saw that his Parents Were killed he felt so scared that he went up to the surface back, but as he was on the way to surface the creeper blew up the secret room the when he went on Surface there was only the house of the other steves left but no steve or steven he went in to one of the house and sat ther then the Villagers came their and started living their. All of the villagers didn't want the Steve to live with them but ther was one who Villager felt Sorry for him And he adopated him then every day he trained steve and but Steve Didn't even Know how to Hold a Axe or Picaxe or A Hoe and he didn't even know how to use a Sword but the Villager had a faith in him so he trained the Steve.

One Year later The Villager teached everythign to Steve he Was the best In Minecraft. Steve Knew How to Survive, how to mine,how to Kill mobs he became the best.All villagers came to the villager how adopated Steve and told him that Steve Knows every thins so now he need's to go Away from the village as The Villager who adopated Steve Promised that after Steve Know Everything About Minecaft he Will need to leave this village. So as Promised the Villager tells Steve to Leave But Steve Says: NO i don't want to lost you as i lost my Parents but the Villager Said You can come here every month If you Want to but you will need to Leave this Village So Steve Says: OK. Then the steve Started paking his Thing and the Villager Gave him A stack of Torch because Steve Might need them.Then he left and on the way he went in the mineshaft to say good bye to his parents And he wasn't affraid this time as he had Diamonds Full Armor And Sword,Picaxe And Axe and Ther were Creeper and Zombies who were planing to Kill Steve But They Thought who would find him As they Said This Steve came to say GoodBye To his PArents and Zombie Said Let's Kill  Steve and Steve Said I will Take Revenge On You and he Choped Heads of Zombies and Creepers He took The Revenge so He Went On A Adventuer To Find More Steve And Steven Like 


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Paper_Clipz_
12/06/2014 6:07 pm
Level 1 : New Explorer
So Many Grammar Errors And Spelling Mistakes..
I don't really get it.. clearly not every player in minecraft were in the kingdom..
Why would Steve bring a sword out to find his parents if he doesn't even know how to use a sword?
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WTFshady
10/18/2014 11:46 am
Level 31 : Artisan Dragonborn
Queen Steven :P

Too many grammar errors though.
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NaThor97
10/17/2014 5:08 pm
Level 25 : Expert Taco
Honestly, not a bad storyline overall. However, the grammar is so bad that it's hard to read. Improve the grammar and you've got yourself a great story. I gave a diamond for effort.
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MammedZ
10/18/2014 3:34 am
Level 40 : Master Architect
thankyou i know this is my first try so improve in the next try
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jccreszMC
10/18/2014 12:25 am
Level 32 : Artisan Nerd
+1 for your point there
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MammedZ
10/17/2014 2:15 pm
Level 40 : Master Architect
ok thx anyway
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XxTacticalXx12
10/17/2014 12:32 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Network
Boring, large grammatical errors. Seems like you rushed when creating this. Incorrect punctuation and huge run-on sentences. 3/10.
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Herobrinebuster
10/17/2014 10:57 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Mage
It has so many run-on sentences, unnecessary capitalization, incorrect punctuation, bad spelling, incorrect use of suffixes, bad grammar overall. Please correct them
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MammedZ
10/17/2014 11:26 am
Level 40 : Master Architect
do you like it then give Diamonds
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MammedZ
10/17/2014 11:26 am
Level 40 : Master Architect
just tell me were i will correct them 
Thankyou
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