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With Shivering Hearts We Wait (Poem)

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The chagrin burns, flames arise

Now darkening once cheery skies
Why does it do this? Just watch, and
With shivering hearts, we wait.

Yes, I tell you it’s true
With shivering hearts we wait.
Not of any reasoning do I,
It’s just that I hesitate.

I hate the system, it kills potential
Stagnating the flow, with the old
It stymies those with talent
With those who were already there, bold.

I now wait, with a shivering heart
For what else, to become talented.
But it is a trick question, for what else?
With shivering hearts we wait.

Deft I wait, as I hesitate
Cry as I might, try as I might
I spin-out, burn-out, head-out
It is no use, with shivering hearts we wait.

So now I sit, with inhibition
A farcry into the hinterlands
Far from the bastion
With a shivering heart, I wait.

Wait as I might, try as I might
I cannot do a thing
My failure runs in a ring
And with a shivering heart, I wait.

Where do I run, where can I hide?
The demons are rising inside.
Ready to pounce, on my insecurity.
And with shivering hearts, you wait.

But I will rise, with determination
For in the distance, salvation.
Naught that can be done, but
With a shivering heart, wait.


I will not explain this poem. Either you get it, or you don't. But I guarantee you this - It means something.
CreditIAmLikeSoCalledTT, Chron, CheeseQuizIndeed, I took the catchphrase from the Blindside album
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02/13/2016 12:41 pm
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DrECH0
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Bravo!
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10/27/2015 1:43 am
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Lostbedouin
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Well, someone got cryptic and twice as good at poetry.
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10/27/2015 11:16 am
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Punkamoar
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OH MY WORD Lost <3
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09/04/2015 1:20 pm
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Masq
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*passes Pikamoar a warming jacket*
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09/04/2015 5:23 pm
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Punkamoar
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That's a straight-jacket
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09/03/2015 11:39 pm
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Chron
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I have absolutely no idea what it means >.>
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09/03/2015 11:49 pm
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Punkamoar
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oh, dang, I thought you did
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09/03/2015 11:51 pm
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Chron
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pssst that was a joke

*insert Studio C reference somewhere in here but I'm tired so screw it*
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09/04/2015 12:00 am
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Punkamoar
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How about some lobster bisque?
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09/03/2015 11:21 pm
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SpowzyThePoet
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i liked the poem ^3^ i dont want to sound like im promoting my profile but i am a poet and i post em on here if you like to read em :3 im just sayin
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