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Feedback on my new art thingy?

Irish's Avatar Irish2/18/14 7:37 am
2/19/2014 4:17 pm
Chrix12's Avatar Chrix12
Heyo! I'm working on a cartoony kinda controller for me to use as my profile pic but It looks a bit....bland, So I want to know what I can add! Heres the pic:



Tell me what it needs please!
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02/19/2014 4:17 pm
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Chrix12
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I... can draw stick figures!

Looks good the way it is.
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02/19/2014 4:12 pm
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ASF
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I like it because of how simple it is.
Not too overdone, just like, "Look, a video game controller".
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02/18/2014 9:49 pm
Level 28 : Expert Pixel Painter
delusi0nal
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And if your like me who can't draw a straight line for their life make sure to put on smoothing.
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02/18/2014 9:48 pm
Level 28 : Expert Pixel Painter
delusi0nal
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Recommendation:
You should copy the controller and then put it behind a layer (Assuming you have paint tool sai or something like that.) and then invert it to light gray so it's a better shadow.
Just saying :3
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02/18/2014 8:56 pm
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TofuKnight
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Honestly, looks good. But I like more simple things like this. Perhaps extend the wire, or give a little more shading to create more depth. But it looks good.
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02/18/2014 8:54 am
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TheGrim123321
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one problem its X-Box -_-

PS3 FOR LIFE
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02/19/2014 3:49 pm
Level 71 : Legendary Nerd
Irish
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Actually, its neither Xbox nor PS3. It is simply a controller. The X stands for Xeno.
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02/18/2014 8:51 am
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Mr-Sloth
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You should add more colours and detail- Use finer lines and blend the colours more
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02/18/2014 8:14 am
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Ascendance
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Sent you a modified version if you feel like taking a look.
It's an awesome controller though. Good Job.
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02/18/2014 7:40 am
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Pixel
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Very nice. You've added a simple, good looking background and done some basic shading. I like it now!

You should make an art blog!
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02/18/2014 7:41 am
Level 71 : Legendary Nerd
Irish
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Thanks! I might do that, but I rarely do art
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