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Newish to building hows this look?

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created 08/04/2014 12:31 am by Goku_LSSJ
last reply 08/04/2014 2:57 am
I want to improve my building skills can I get some constructive criticism on this build?

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Goku_LSSJ
Level 21 : Expert Zombie
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08/04/2014 2:57 am
Level 21 : Expert Zombie
Goku_LSSJ
thanks for the responses guys ill woek making it a bit more consistent
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08/04/2014 2:40 am
Level 27 : Expert Dragonborn
kbman22
I would make less "boxy," also its a tiny pit random, but other than that, its great!
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08/04/2014 2:19 am
Level 21 : Expert Architect
maklom
Blue has it right. Trust me, I do reviews on a big creative server.
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08/04/2014 2:07 am
Level 26 : Expert Lumberjack
BLESS_YO_FACE
My advice is the same as Blue's. I'm nowhere near as good a builder as half the people on this site, so I don't mind if my opinion means nothing to you xD

Instead of just torches, you can add some "flare". Put in some glowstone chandeliers. Perhaps even make a subtle change by adding redstone torches as well. Try to make it a bit less random looking as well, it almost looks like it's been made with world edit
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08/04/2014 1:54 am
Level 1 : New Network
Constance
Hey there, Goku. The shape has some potential! However, it is very randomized, giving it a very busy and uncoordinated look. I'd recommend you experiment with different build palettes to make the blocks contrast better, helping the build flow. If you have any questions, or you want to build with me some time, feel free to private message me. Best of luck!

BlueCosmo
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08/04/2014 1:54 am
Level 11 : Journeyman Engineer
_coolness_
Not bad...
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08/04/2014 1:51 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Princess
Faxwy
I'm guessing this is a house, it is very unique! Maybe try to use something else besides torches

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