Well I started a new series an would like feedback. I would like to know what you guys want to see, what's missing, and what I did good on. I'm still new in commentating and would love to even further my abilities to allow both my viewers and newcomers to be able to enjoy watching my videos all the way through instead of getting bored a few minutes later and regretting watching them. All feedback will be appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/user/UnendingE?feature=watch