Right away your intro music has a watermark that is verbal. That is really unprofessional and I suggest changing it.

Another thing would be cool if you were to count how much of each block you would use so if someone is making it in survival they know exactly how much of each thing they need.

You should also turn off the minecraft music, and if possible turn off your computer background noises.

One last thing that I know is hard and is most likely impossible for you to fix but if you are capable of looking up ways to increase your FPS when you record it would make the video more easy on the eyes.




Other then that it's a good video. Teaches you how to do the redstone and is really quick. I subscribed :)