So I am going to start a youtube channel soon, and I figured I needed a intro. So I gave it a shot, this is really the first video I ever made meant for public viewing... I know, kinda pitiful. Anyways, What do you guys think? I know it does look beginnerish, please be kind. Any advice or tips would be very helpful.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhF9LZkFzK4