Got the first two episodes up in a new series I've started.

I think I've put significantly more effort into them then your typical Let's Play, but I'm new and I'd like some constructive criticism from YouTubers with some experience.

My Playlist:
http://www.youtube....3dVssoiofDa6uMN

Episode 1:



Episode 2:


Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

TangoTek