Conner65
So I've been working on this for a while and I just posted this in a blog earlier, and I was wondering if some people could check it out? Tell me how I did?
So if I could have a few minutes of your time, click here:
Chapter 1: http://bit.ly/15vpCHy
Chapter 2: http://bit.ly/17i79Mx
So if I could have a few minutes of your time, click here:
Chapter 1: http://bit.ly/15vpCHy
Chapter 2: http://bit.ly/17i79Mx
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To both of you, thanks xD I saw that whilst editing and I just forgot to change it
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That might have been intentional, @cooper, but all in all, very nice.
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I agree, it's very good! A few minor spelling errors (you said "fort-five" instead of "forty-five"), but nothing too killer. Great work!
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It's great, you will improve on it!
