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Story I'm writing + art. Please tell me how I can do better!
This is basically the prologue to a story I'm writing. There's a bit more before what's written here in the actual story, but this is just about the entity in the drawing.
Tell me how I can do better! Also, if this is the wrong section or shouldn't be posted here, whoops...
http://centuryfall.deviantart.com/art/Infininari-the-Necronegative-476812867
Tell me how I can do better! Also, if this is the wrong section or shouldn't be posted here, whoops...
http://centuryfall.deviantart.com/art/Infininari-the-Necronegative-476812867
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All I can say is improve upon details, but since it's a prologue I don't think that matters too much.