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Conner65
Neptonic
Hey whats up my fellow Minecraftians? I'm Evo, and if any body here has even heard of my page, you'll know I'm a writer. I'm also a bit of an Anime Junky...Just a bit xD
So I decided to fuse the two together and write a story based off of the Anime called Sword Art Online. I was wondering if you could do me the huge favor of reading the first chapter,( http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9440787/1/Erin-s-Fear ), and telling me what you think
~Evo
So I decided to fuse the two together and write a story based off of the Anime called Sword Art Online. I was wondering if you could do me the huge favor of reading the first chapter,( http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9440787/1/Erin-s-Fear ), and telling me what you think
~Evo
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^That is some real helpful stuff right there -_-
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sounded cool so far i didnt read it all, i don't have any time at the moment
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Sounds good for a start of an epic adventure! I like it alot, even though I've never heard of this anime before. Keep up the good work I guess.
-Neptonic
-Neptonic
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This is good. Showing the situation from someone else's point of view rather than making a fanfic about Kirito and Asuna, which most of them are. I like it
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Thanks Alot! I actually later in my outline have it set for Kirito and Asuna to appear. Thanks for the feedback!
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate that!
~Evo
~Evo
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Its actually pretty good! I had fun reading this
