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Poetry Feedback?
You don't know depression,
You don't know stress.
So squeaky with cleaning,
but my life's a -snip- mess.
You don't know the meaning to get -snip- off your chest,
So ill just finish this line, and you can skip all the rest.
Cause your listening closely,
but your the farthest from hearing me.
Your just judging my character,
and misinterpreting me lyrically.
How can you see me, if you don't look?
Stop trying to read me, I'm a closed book.
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I aint a thug,
I don't carry a nine,
But whatcha know about your dad being buried at nine?
So whats more dangerous,
A gangster who aint afraid to do time,
or a depressed white girl who doesn't care if she dies..
You don't know stress.
So squeaky with cleaning,
but my life's a -snip- mess.
You don't know the meaning to get -snip- off your chest,
So ill just finish this line, and you can skip all the rest.
Cause your listening closely,
but your the farthest from hearing me.
Your just judging my character,
and misinterpreting me lyrically.
How can you see me, if you don't look?
Stop trying to read me, I'm a closed book.
...
I aint a thug,
I don't carry a nine,
But whatcha know about your dad being buried at nine?
So whats more dangerous,
A gangster who aint afraid to do time,
or a depressed white girl who doesn't care if she dies..
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It is a rap, sorry. I consider it the same thing. Its poetry, just read differently.
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