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|-^-|<>The Corrupt City Rp<>|-^-| Application thread
aaron5699
ultradoom5
This is NOT a Server RP!!!!
Backstory: In Freson city all is calm. Children go to school, people go to work, friendships are made, love is found and lost. This city is a proseprous home and shining beacon for all of us, but all is not what it seems. The government is corrupt, using the money they steal for their own wants, to some they can see this but many do nothing.... The reason the secret police, created to take down any who oppose the government and any who may one day. In this city what will you be, a high ranking official, a humble civilian, a plotting rebel, a member of the secret police, a peacekeeper here to keep all safe or something else only you can decide so come and see.
Rules:
1.No meta-gaming
2.No god-modding
3.Have the grammar of at least a 6th grader.
4.You have 3 chances to get accepted.After that our ruling is finale
5. Put the word 'Fool' in your app so I know that you read this
6. Have FUN!!!
Applications:
Citizen:
Name:
Age:
Occupation:
Personality:
Backstory:
Family((if any)):
Appearance:
Anything Else
Official:
Name:
Age((30+)):
Personality
Rank:
In charge of?:
Backstory:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything Else:
Secret police:
Name:
Age((18+)):
Personality:
Backstory:
Cover job:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything else:
Rebel:
Name:
Age((any)):
Personality:
Cover job:
Backstory:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything else:
Acceptor's:
-Aaron5699 ((me))
-Darksoul128
Backstory: In Freson city all is calm. Children go to school, people go to work, friendships are made, love is found and lost. This city is a proseprous home and shining beacon for all of us, but all is not what it seems. The government is corrupt, using the money they steal for their own wants, to some they can see this but many do nothing.... The reason the secret police, created to take down any who oppose the government and any who may one day. In this city what will you be, a high ranking official, a humble civilian, a plotting rebel, a member of the secret police, a peacekeeper here to keep all safe or something else only you can decide so come and see.
Rules:
1.No meta-gaming
2.No god-modding
3.Have the grammar of at least a 6th grader.
4.You have 3 chances to get accepted.After that our ruling is finale
5. Put the word 'Fool' in your app so I know that you read this
6. Have FUN!!!
Applications:
Citizen:
Name:
Age:
Occupation:
Personality:
Backstory:
Family((if any)):
Appearance:
Anything Else
Official:
Name:
Age((30+)):
Personality
Rank:
In charge of?:
Backstory:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything Else:
Secret police:
Name:
Age((18+)):
Personality:
Backstory:
Cover job:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything else:
Rebel:
Name:
Age((any)):
Personality:
Cover job:
Backstory:
Family:
Appearance:
Anything else:
Acceptor's:
-Aaron5699 ((me))
-Darksoul128
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Amen to that. Yes, I perfectly understand the irony of that coming from a 13 year old.
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Uuhhhhg, them kids these days.
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I think hes quitting Roleplays or starting again or something like that.
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Why Aaron?
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RP HAS BEEN CANCELLED!!!!
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Trap accepted
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Rebel:
Name: Cameron " Krazy " Smith
Age:21
Personality: Cold, sarcastic, sadistic. Hides his actual personality by acting happy, and telling jokes all the time.
Cover job: He acts as an underground rap artist, sending videos around on the internet bad mouthing the government. When posting a video he never reveals his identity, only going by " Krazy ". He has had a rise in popularity recently, sparking even more rebellion in the city.
Backstory: Cameron had lived his life poverty, and blamed the government for his problems. They really were, the Secret Police having taken his father away for questioning the government. Cameron joined the rebellion, and decided to try and spread it through the internet. He writes and performs songs, then posts them anonymously on the web. He doesn't like talking about his childhood, in fact, he doesn't like talking either.
Family: Mother - Deceased. Natural Causes.
Father - Deceased. Killed by the Secret Police.
Appearance: Masked:
Unmasked:
Anything else: Foolish Fools Fooling around.
Name: Cameron " Krazy " Smith
Age:21
Personality: Cold, sarcastic, sadistic. Hides his actual personality by acting happy, and telling jokes all the time.
Cover job: He acts as an underground rap artist, sending videos around on the internet bad mouthing the government. When posting a video he never reveals his identity, only going by " Krazy ". He has had a rise in popularity recently, sparking even more rebellion in the city.
Backstory: Cameron had lived his life poverty, and blamed the government for his problems. They really were, the Secret Police having taken his father away for questioning the government. Cameron joined the rebellion, and decided to try and spread it through the internet. He writes and performs songs, then posts them anonymously on the web. He doesn't like talking about his childhood, in fact, he doesn't like talking either.
Family: Mother - Deceased. Natural Causes.
Father - Deceased. Killed by the Secret Police.
Appearance: Masked:
Click to reveal
Unmasked:
Click to reveal
Anything else: Foolish Fools Fooling around.
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Screw it accepted
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Citizen:
Name:Katie Smith
Age:13
Occupation:student
Personality:Naive, kind, caring
Backstory:Born Áine's twin sister they shared the same up bringing, when her father left she was devastated but kept strong. She loves music and spends a lot of time listening to it, she always has her head phones with her. Katie loves cats and spends her time watching the new cat man with her sister, although she may try and steal one soon.
Family((if any)):Sister, step parents
Appearance:
Anything Else: FOOL!!!
Name:Katie Smith
Age:13
Occupation:student
Personality:Naive, kind, caring
Backstory:Born Áine's twin sister they shared the same up bringing, when her father left she was devastated but kept strong. She loves music and spends a lot of time listening to it, she always has her head phones with her. Katie loves cats and spends her time watching the new cat man with her sister, although she may try and steal one soon.
Family((if any)):Sister, step parents
Appearance:
Anything Else: FOOL!!!
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Does the Same Thing With PM's, Sadly. This Has Happened Loads of Times Before. Looks Like I'm Going with the 'Paste it in Notepad, Take a Screenshot, And Post the Image Here' Route...
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PMC Hates Me... Won't Let Me Post My Application, As Almost Always. It Brings Me to the Stupid 'General Error' Page...
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ack! You could always PM it to me and i could app for you! ( IM not going to steal your app im already in this RP)
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Yeah.....That was a pretty Stupid move on my part.....So I am going back, and adding a Backstory.
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aaron5699Secret Police:
Name: Ethan Mars
Age((18+)): 22 ((Posing to be 17))
Backstory:Dont want people copying
Cover job:High School Student
Family: No known relatives
Appearance:Click to reveal
Anything else:He has all those cats :3.Also You are a Fool
I was thinking of applying, then this happened.
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Editing my app to show the suit.
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@ Liam: Accepted
@ Lovasus: Accepted
@ XoXoAwesome: Accepted when you complete the backstory.
@ Lovasus: Accepted
@ XoXoAwesome: Accepted when you complete the backstory.
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Citizen
Name: Nicole Jones
Age: 18
Occupation: She will get one when she comes on the thread.
Backstory: Ugh.. too lazy.
Nicole is much like a peacemaker, between friends, family, and political stuffs. She's also an artist and loves to draw in her notepad. She also writes ideas as well. She draws the city parks and scenery of lightning. She draws people and hands them for free, just to see the smile on their faces. Nicole is still at school, her senior year. It's been hard. No one really cares for her, only her stuck-up little friends who follow her around like a princess. They act like she is ruler of their kingdom and she loves the attention. Occasionally she carries out her diary, full of secrets, gossip, and rumours. She writes about how her friends treat her like a queen and how the mean, rude, rich girls don't deserve what they have now. She draws pictures of them being a rat lady or one of them what they are on the inside. Between the popularity chart, she drew a diagram of the least popular to the most, her being in the middle.
Family: Be discussing it with my fellow RPers
Appearance:
Anything Else
Fool! I'm the one who eats your pretzels!
Name: Nicole Jones
Age: 18
Occupation: She will get one when she comes on the thread.
Backstory: Ugh.. too lazy.
Nicole is much like a peacemaker, between friends, family, and political stuffs. She's also an artist and loves to draw in her notepad. She also writes ideas as well. She draws the city parks and scenery of lightning. She draws people and hands them for free, just to see the smile on their faces. Nicole is still at school, her senior year. It's been hard. No one really cares for her, only her stuck-up little friends who follow her around like a princess. They act like she is ruler of their kingdom and she loves the attention. Occasionally she carries out her diary, full of secrets, gossip, and rumours. She writes about how her friends treat her like a queen and how the mean, rude, rich girls don't deserve what they have now. She draws pictures of them being a rat lady or one of them what they are on the inside. Between the popularity chart, she drew a diagram of the least popular to the most, her being in the middle.
Family: Be discussing it with my fellow RPers
Appearance:
Click to reveal
Anything Else
Fool! I'm the one who eats your pretzels!
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Name: Vannesa Jengouli
Age: 14
Occupation: Schoolgirl. She's 14, what other job would she have?
Backstory: Coming soon to dis rp =D
Family: Father and brother are missing/dead, see backstory.
Mother: Alisa, 46. Sweet and shy. Netural.
Appearance:
Anything Else: You fool! You dare make a thread without my exsistance!?! D=<
Age: 14
Occupation: Schoolgirl. She's 14, what other job would she have?
Backstory: Coming soon to dis rp =D
Family: Father and brother are missing/dead, see backstory.
Mother: Alisa, 46. Sweet and shy. Netural.
Appearance:
Click to reveal
Anything Else: You fool! You dare make a thread without my exsistance!?! D=<
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Secret police:
Name: Joshua K Gondo
Age: 23
Backstory: Joshua was 6 when his father and mother became involved with the government. His mother became one of the first 50 secret police and his father climbed the ranks as a government official. Joshua when he was old enough (18) became a secret police and went on his first mission to raid a rebel base. The rebels there had no weapons so Joshua easily took them as prisoner and gave them to the government to be tortured and questioned. Joshua became 23 when his mom was killed by a rebel that was involved in a base raid and shot to protect the other rebels. Joshua took them all prisoner by knocking out the only one with a weapon (The one who killed his mom) and once again giving them to the government. He did this till he was 23 and his father died from old age. He became a very good secret police and was trusted by the government greatly.
Cover job: grocery store worker.
Family:
Father, Dead.
Mother, Dead.
Sister, Alive, Age of 6
Brother, Alive, Age of 19 and just became a secret police.
Appearance: Light brown hair, Green eyes, Scar about left eyebrow, isn't tall but isn't short, light weight, Wears normal clothes nothing special.
Anything else: He is no fool.
Name: Joshua K Gondo
Age: 23
Backstory: Joshua was 6 when his father and mother became involved with the government. His mother became one of the first 50 secret police and his father climbed the ranks as a government official. Joshua when he was old enough (18) became a secret police and went on his first mission to raid a rebel base. The rebels there had no weapons so Joshua easily took them as prisoner and gave them to the government to be tortured and questioned. Joshua became 23 when his mom was killed by a rebel that was involved in a base raid and shot to protect the other rebels. Joshua took them all prisoner by knocking out the only one with a weapon (The one who killed his mom) and once again giving them to the government. He did this till he was 23 and his father died from old age. He became a very good secret police and was trusted by the government greatly.
Cover job: grocery store worker.
Family:
Father, Dead.
Mother, Dead.
Sister, Alive, Age of 6
Brother, Alive, Age of 19 and just became a secret police.
Appearance: Light brown hair, Green eyes, Scar about left eyebrow, isn't tall but isn't short, light weight, Wears normal clothes nothing special.
Anything else: He is no fool.
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Accepted Shane...MAKING THREAD NOW!!!!!
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Citizen:
Name: Áine Smith (Pronounced Awn-Yeh Smyth.)
Age:13
Occupation:School. (Durr)
Backstory:Áine was raised in a family of love and care. Everything was great until one cold christmas eve when her father left to get some milk and juice. Áine asked for a twix, but she never got that twix. It sounds alot less sad then it it is. But her dad never came back. It turns out he had ran off with the cleaner. Her mother never forgave herself and at the age of 11 she had to go to her nasty godparents. She still lives with them in their apartment block now, but hates them with all her heart. She still has room for something - or someone, to fill. She now finds amusement and other weird feelings from watching the cat man that lives in the same apartment block.
Family((if any)): Sister, Stepparents.
Appearance:
Anything Else: Names for fools: Áine is an irish name which means Splendor, Radiance,Brilliance. Áine is also the Irish god of Summer, which is the main reason i picked the name
PS.
If you didnt know already, im from Ireland.
Name: Áine Smith (Pronounced Awn-Yeh Smyth.)
Age:13
Occupation:School. (Durr)
Backstory:Áine was raised in a family of love and care. Everything was great until one cold christmas eve when her father left to get some milk and juice. Áine asked for a twix, but she never got that twix. It sounds alot less sad then it it is. But her dad never came back. It turns out he had ran off with the cleaner. Her mother never forgave herself and at the age of 11 she had to go to her nasty godparents. She still lives with them in their apartment block now, but hates them with all her heart. She still has room for something - or someone, to fill. She now finds amusement and other weird feelings from watching the cat man that lives in the same apartment block.
Family((if any)): Sister, Stepparents.
Appearance:
Anything Else: Names for fools: Áine is an irish name which means Splendor, Radiance,Brilliance. Áine is also the Irish god of Summer, which is the main reason i picked the name
PS.
If you didnt know already, im from Ireland.
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Yes......He is very lonely in his apartment.So he owns a Shit load of cats.He is a Like a cat lady.But much younger, and a dude.
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Someone likes his cats..
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Secret Police:
Name: Ethan Mars
Age((18+)): 22 ((Posing to be 17))
Backstory:
Cover job:High School Student
Family: No known relatives
Appearance:
Anything else:He has all those cats :3.Also You are a Fool
Name: Ethan Mars
Age((18+)): 22 ((Posing to be 17))
Backstory:
Cover job:High School Student
Family: No known relatives
Appearance:
Click to reveal
Anything else:He has all those cats :3.Also You are a Fool
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Hah!
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^ Mafia and Mercenary for hire over here! Lol i kid.
DD don't question but be relieved you are accpeted.
DD don't question but be relieved you are accpeted.
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Yay! But really, what was with the wait?
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Swalezee, Accepted
Sorry for the wait DD you're accepted.
Sorry for the wait DD you're accepted.
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Read my first post changed to the RP APP.
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Looks like I've been declined...Or so it seems. Hopefully it's just you taking the time to read mine...Right? Because if I don't get accepted, it's alright with me..
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Ultra, ACCEPTED
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Rebel:
Name: Jack Hernandez
Age: 26
Cover job: He works at the local museum.
Backstory: Jacks father died before he was born. Growing up, Jack's mother was depressed most of the time, but managed to pull through enough to teach Jack. Jack spent a lot of time out, taking extra school lessons, to fuel a love of learning that he had developed over the years. Jack especially loved art and history, so began spending quite a bit of time at the museum as well. After graduating college, Jack went to Egypt for a couple of years, getting a job on an excavation. He was a great help to the excavation, having studied that kind of stuff for quite awhile. When he came back home to Freson city, he applied for a job at the local museum, and got it. Jack had never paid much attention to politics until then, so had no idea about the government corruption, but after watching the news for awhile, he figured it out. Remembering a rumor he had heard in his earlier years, he did his best to track down this rebellion, and join.
Family: Father: Deceased. Mother: Retired, living in the suburbs. He was an only child.
Appearance: http://www.geforce.com/Active/en_US/sha ... tcause.jpg But, normally not jumping out of planes like a boss\, and he doesn't wear a necklace.
Anything else: I pity the fool! He is very smart and strategic, but he isn'y very strong.
Name: Jack Hernandez
Age: 26
Cover job: He works at the local museum.
Backstory: Jacks father died before he was born. Growing up, Jack's mother was depressed most of the time, but managed to pull through enough to teach Jack. Jack spent a lot of time out, taking extra school lessons, to fuel a love of learning that he had developed over the years. Jack especially loved art and history, so began spending quite a bit of time at the museum as well. After graduating college, Jack went to Egypt for a couple of years, getting a job on an excavation. He was a great help to the excavation, having studied that kind of stuff for quite awhile. When he came back home to Freson city, he applied for a job at the local museum, and got it. Jack had never paid much attention to politics until then, so had no idea about the government corruption, but after watching the news for awhile, he figured it out. Remembering a rumor he had heard in his earlier years, he did his best to track down this rebellion, and join.
Family: Father: Deceased. Mother: Retired, living in the suburbs. He was an only child.
Appearance: http://www.geforce.com/Active/en_US/sha ... tcause.jpg But, normally not jumping out of planes like a boss\, and he doesn't wear a necklace.
Anything else: I pity the fool! He is very smart and strategic, but he isn'y very strong.
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Bro, can we have a custom job? Eg peacekeeper or the actual police? nothing too OP like president tho.
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'Ave you read my application, Aaron? I hope to be accepted!
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Can wait for you guys to apply!!!
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Citizen:
Name:Joe fràntonio
Age:20
Fake Job- Casino Owner/Manager (this casino has poker (I'm sure casinos have poker))
Occupation:Mercenary(same as Bounty Hunter) and Gangster (Mafia)
Backstory:Joe Fràntonio, at a young age was fought to fight for the 'right' side, Problem was he was never shown WHICH side as the morally right, every single night of his child life he heard his mother and father squabble and bicker about who was on the right side!
Until the faithful day... When joe entered the House find his mother, on the floor covered in a pool of blood and seeing his father with a gun in his hand. (handgun),
Joe quickly fled from his family..
Upon his arrival on the streets he met a man called 'Slinky'. Slinky as was the man who taught him the tricks of the trade, Slinky taught Joe who to suckle up to, to receive the best rep if he were too survive...
10 years later, He became a gangster and mercenary after his 'Casino' business won over investors and Joe quickly gave his 'apdoted' father Slinky a son to be proud of, and the kid who was once divided by two opposing factions now belonged in the neutral faction. Of course his orginal family contacted him but the horrors he witnessed he couldn't go back, He also heard one of his brother ran away as well. Which left one brother and a dad. Joe was in neutral faction and on his own.
Family((if any)):
'Adopted' Father- 'Slinky' job - godfather status - alive faction - neutral age- 60-70s
Father- Name- Frank fràntonio Job-Secret Police status-possibly alive faction- Guessing Imperial? Age- 46
Mother- Name- Gabriel Fràntonio job-Rebel status - dead faction - Rebel age- 46
Brother-name- Remì Fràntonio Job - Secret Police status- alive faction - Imperial age- 24
Brother 2- name- David Fràntonio job - Official Status - Alive faction- imperial age- 22
Appearance:Tanned, Muscleur Build, Medium Height, brown slicked back hair white fedora and a white tux with black stripes, which are also the same for his legs, black buttoned up top (for suit) and a white tie (complete with cane)
Anything Else- I pity the fool!
Picture- http://www.google.co.uk/search?tbm=isch&source=mog&hl=en-GB&gl=uk&client=safari&tab=wi&q=white%20suit%20with%20black%20stripes&sa=N&biw=320&bih=356#p=0 see 9th result and imagen the opposite color scheme, white suit and black stripes.
Name:Joe fràntonio
Age:20
Fake Job- Casino Owner/Manager (this casino has poker (I'm sure casinos have poker))
Occupation:Mercenary(same as Bounty Hunter) and Gangster (Mafia)
Backstory:Joe Fràntonio, at a young age was fought to fight for the 'right' side, Problem was he was never shown WHICH side as the morally right, every single night of his child life he heard his mother and father squabble and bicker about who was on the right side!
Until the faithful day... When joe entered the House find his mother, on the floor covered in a pool of blood and seeing his father with a gun in his hand. (handgun),
Joe quickly fled from his family..
Upon his arrival on the streets he met a man called 'Slinky'. Slinky as was the man who taught him the tricks of the trade, Slinky taught Joe who to suckle up to, to receive the best rep if he were too survive...
10 years later, He became a gangster and mercenary after his 'Casino' business won over investors and Joe quickly gave his 'apdoted' father Slinky a son to be proud of, and the kid who was once divided by two opposing factions now belonged in the neutral faction. Of course his orginal family contacted him but the horrors he witnessed he couldn't go back, He also heard one of his brother ran away as well. Which left one brother and a dad. Joe was in neutral faction and on his own.
Family((if any)):
'Adopted' Father- 'Slinky' job - godfather status - alive faction - neutral age- 60-70s
Father- Name- Frank fràntonio Job-Secret Police status-possibly alive faction- Guessing Imperial? Age- 46
Mother- Name- Gabriel Fràntonio job-Rebel status - dead faction - Rebel age- 46
Brother-name- Remì Fràntonio Job - Secret Police status- alive faction - Imperial age- 24
Brother 2- name- David Fràntonio job - Official Status - Alive faction- imperial age- 22
Appearance:Tanned, Muscleur Build, Medium Height, brown slicked back hair white fedora and a white tux with black stripes, which are also the same for his legs, black buttoned up top (for suit) and a white tie (complete with cane)
Anything Else- I pity the fool!
Picture- http://www.google.co.uk/search?tbm=isch&source=mog&hl=en-GB&gl=uk&client=safari&tab=wi&q=white%20suit%20with%20black%20stripes&sa=N&biw=320&bih=356#p=0 see 9th result and imagen the opposite color scheme, white suit and black stripes.
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I'll Probably Apply Soon-ish...
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Rebel:
Name: Alex Galipsi
Age((any)): 25
Cover job: Baker
Backstory: Alex grew up, unknowing of the corruption going on around him. He used to go to school everyday, where they told him lies to cover up what they were actually doing. A few of his friends, who were rebels told him, one day, of everything that was happening, but he had no intention of joining the rebellion, at least, not yet. A few months later, members of the secret police took his father away, because of suspicious aroused, when he was seen near a hotspot for rebel troops. However, what they didn't know that fateful day, were the secrets implanted in young Alex's mind. On that day, he decided to get vengeance on the people who took his father away. And on that day, he became a rebel.
Family: Father; Name: George Galipsi, Status: Taken by Imperials: Possibly dead, Faction: Suspected as rebel.
Mother; Name: Kalie Galipsi ((Maiden Name: Crofinas)), Status: Alive; Not taken, Faction: Neutral
Sister:Name: Stephanie Galipsi, Status: Alive;Not taken, Faction: Neutral
Brother:Name: John Galipsi, Status: Alive; Part of Imperial High Council, Faction: Imperial
Appearance: Medium build, medium height, brown ruffled hair, scar across right eye.
Anything else: I am no FOOL!
Name: Alex Galipsi
Age((any)): 25
Cover job: Baker
Backstory: Alex grew up, unknowing of the corruption going on around him. He used to go to school everyday, where they told him lies to cover up what they were actually doing. A few of his friends, who were rebels told him, one day, of everything that was happening, but he had no intention of joining the rebellion, at least, not yet. A few months later, members of the secret police took his father away, because of suspicious aroused, when he was seen near a hotspot for rebel troops. However, what they didn't know that fateful day, were the secrets implanted in young Alex's mind. On that day, he decided to get vengeance on the people who took his father away. And on that day, he became a rebel.
Family: Father; Name: George Galipsi, Status: Taken by Imperials: Possibly dead, Faction: Suspected as rebel.
Mother; Name: Kalie Galipsi ((Maiden Name: Crofinas)), Status: Alive; Not taken, Faction: Neutral
Sister:Name: Stephanie Galipsi, Status: Alive;Not taken, Faction: Neutral
Brother:Name: John Galipsi, Status: Alive; Part of Imperial High Council, Faction: Imperial
Appearance: Medium build, medium height, brown ruffled hair, scar across right eye.
Anything else: I am no FOOL!
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Yeah....It is pretty legit...So apply for total RP epicness.
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hmmm.... Seems legit.
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