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created 05/07/2018 8:36 pm by pale1
last reply 05/23/2018 4:56 pm
Hi, I'm pale1 and I wanted to see if I could get some feedback on some builds that I have made. I am currently a builder for a server called guncolony and we have a bunch of gun related games on our server so I mostly am building fps maps these days.

Please tell me what you think!








Bonus points if you can tell what video game these maps are from ;)

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pale1
Level 10 : Journeyman Dolphin
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05/23/2018 4:56 pm
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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I've started work on a new original map (not from any video game) and I added it to the pictures above. Please give feedback and note that it is a work in progress
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05/16/2018 6:14 pm
Level 12 Journeyman Engineer
garlicbreathinator
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The layout of the maps looks pretty good, but it is very lacking in detail. To add depth without constricting passageways, I would recommend adding stairs built into the walls. Also, you need to add a lot more block variation (cracked/mossy/stairs in stonebricks).

Also, I have been building a vanilla quakecraft game and some of these maps might work great for that if you wanted to publish them. If you do decide to release them, please send me a message so I can check it out! Thanks!
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05/23/2018 4:53 pm
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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Thanks for the feedback! Unfortunately I won't be releasing these maps to the public as they are only meant to be playable on the guncolony server. I might have some other works that you may be interested in though! I'll post them in the future if you're interested
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05/09/2018 6:47 pm
Level 3 Apprentice Crafter
Underscorezed
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The maps provide great detail, but in a FPS, having some form of cover would be ideal. For instance, in an open field, put a hill here, a fence, or even a wall, to prevent campers from dominating, add ways to get up to the roof/other high areas, like collapsed buildings, and ways to flank, like a tunnel.
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05/15/2018 8:42 pm
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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These maps are remakes of fps maps from a popular game haha! There's tons of cover do not worry. Speaking purely about gameplay these maps work perfectly.
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05/08/2018 4:38 pm
Level 9 Apprentice Network
thunderbolt73
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First impressions are extremely good, I can't tell you what games they are from cause I don't play nearly enough shooters.

Maybe early call of duty?
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05/15/2018 8:40 pm
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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Not call of duty! Nice guess tho
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05/08/2018 11:06 am
Level 13 Journeyman Architect
Dmitron26
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Looks great I like the realism.
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05/07/2018 11:12 pm
Level 45 Master Sweetheart
CaelChan
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Looks good! I would recommend adding depth to the builds and more block variants as others have mentioned before, as I've noticed your builds are kinda square / boxy. Otherwise it looks great! Keep up the good work
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05/08/2018 12:23 am
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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Depth can be hard to add sometimes with these sorts of maps since adding depth to a wall removes space from the interior. If the interior is too small it's bad for combat. I hope that makes sense. I do agree though, if I could add more depth to my builds I totally would.
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05/08/2018 12:23 am
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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Depth can be hard to add sometimes with these sorts of maps since adding depth to a wall removes space from the interior. If the interior is too small it's bad for combat. I hope that makes sense. I do agree though, if I could add more depth to my builds I totally would.
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05/08/2018 12:58 am
Level 45 Master Sweetheart
CaelChan
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I would recommend simply building in different shapes. Instead of a box, why not go for a T-shape? or something like that. As for depth, simply making the depth between 2 blocks adds a good portion towards it. If space is an issue, simply making a larger area could be a resolution. If you'd like I can send you some examples of what I've built if you're confused on what I mean. Simply throwing out suggestions, feel free to do whatever you feel is right!
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05/07/2018 10:38 pm
Level 23 Expert Artist
PsychoticDaze_
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These are actually some great builds. It seems that a lot of the fps MC remakes have a certain style to them which I think you captured perfectly, though adding some depth/definition along with noise as ThatTonyboo said would be good! Keep up the work!
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05/07/2018 10:17 pm
Level 5 Apprentice Explorer
Seebass4
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Looks quite good, keep up the great work!
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05/07/2018 9:43 pm
Level 42 Master Professor
Shu Kurenai
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ThatTonyboo has a point, but besides that they really are some great builds! The only thing that bothers me is, why is the car made out of wood? xD I'm kidding.
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05/08/2018 12:19 am
Level 10 Journeyman Dolphin
pale1
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We have a resource pack on guncolony that makes jungle wood look more like a stone texture lol. Sorry if it looks weird!
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05/08/2018 4:49 pm
Level 42 Master Professor
Shu Kurenai
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No no it looks fine!
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05/07/2018 9:17 pm
Level 4 Apprentice Ranger
ThatTonyboo
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They look nice, maybe add some variations in block usage and some "noise" (I believe its called that, I'm a crap builder). Otherwise, nice!

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