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The River Witch Hut :: Constructive Criticism
Lone__Wolf
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I really like it man! It's simple, yet intriguing! Keep it up!
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I like it! You should add it to "projects" and see how well it does!
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Hi LoneWolf,
I really like the build...would it be possible for you to release a world download? Because i'd really like to explore it myself and see if there were any improvements you could make! But it is an amazong build
I really like the build...would it be possible for you to release a world download? Because i'd really like to explore it myself and see if there were any improvements you could make! But it is an amazong build
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Looks great!
As for constructive criticism, I would personally try to add a little more atmosphere to the build (kinda hard to tell a witch lives there at first glance). As it's a witch's hut I'd assume that it would be located in a darker environment such as a swamp or bog (with a river of course as that's part of the contest). I think adding in a very dense forest of dead or "spooky" looking trees could help (example: weeping willow) along with mushrooms, more vines, undergrowth, and lilly pads. In addition, you could also change the biome of the area (with WorldEdit or another plugin/mod) to a swamp biome. It affects both the sky color as well as the water color which then adds to the overall atmosphere of the build.
Good luck on the contest!
As for constructive criticism, I would personally try to add a little more atmosphere to the build (kinda hard to tell a witch lives there at first glance). As it's a witch's hut I'd assume that it would be located in a darker environment such as a swamp or bog (with a river of course as that's part of the contest). I think adding in a very dense forest of dead or "spooky" looking trees could help (example: weeping willow) along with mushrooms, more vines, undergrowth, and lilly pads. In addition, you could also change the biome of the area (with WorldEdit or another plugin/mod) to a swamp biome. It affects both the sky color as well as the water color which then adds to the overall atmosphere of the build.
Good luck on the contest!
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Its a nice build but what I would have done was put it on the other side of the river because witches are mysterious an wouldn't want to be noticed, also the tree at the back house is kinda random.... Other than that Well Done!!!
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Oohh...Nice.
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Thanks, It was done for the "Down the river" contest found here :: http://ktpt.forumotion.com/t19-02-build ... -the-river :: I think it turned out rather well for a little 10min project though
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Well made. The one thing I can't agree on is its not actually on the river! :OOO MUTINY! XD Its ok though, its really nice.
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Yeah, its a depiction of a witch hut on a river..
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uhm. you built it?
