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Chron's 210 Subs Writing Contest
Chron
AkirAssasin
Hey guys! Chron here, and I figured it's about time I hosted a real contest to celebrate my accomplishment of 210 subs (thanks everyone! luv y'all <3)!
The rules of this contest are pretty simple: Make an acrostic poem using your name/a word that means a lot to you. It could be your PMC username, your Minecraft IGN (you can exclude numbers/extra characters to make things easier), or any other word that means a lot to you (explain why it's important through the poem, of course).
Judges:
Just me at the moment, but I think that's all I'll need.
Prizes:
1st Place: An opportunity to do a collab blog with me (if you want), a fair amount of diamonds, and a subscription
2nd Place: An interview conducted by me (if you want), a fair amount of diamonds, and a subscription
3rd Place: A fair amount of diamonds and a subscription
(If you place in any of these ranks and have Pokemon X/Y/OR/AS, I also have some bred Pokemon I might give ya.)
Deadline: March 5th at 11:59:59 PM CST
Hope y'all enjoy, and I can't wait to see what y'all write! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. (= Also, if anyone would be willing to make trophies, I'd appreciate it.
Oh, one more thing: Just post it in a spoiler in a forum post. No need to make a blog out of it, because they're most likely going to be kinda short.
Current Participants:
TheHipster
OreoVal
Pikamoar
Tech Zero
TheyCallMeAidan
Zatharel
PixelCrash_
TehWormy
Paddy
Stingray_FTW
Leeanne
piratecraft
planetblox2000
RetroCityRampage
AkirAssasin
IAmSoLikeCalledTT
nightnday
Jetra
TheChipsandip
Tell your friends! (=
The rules of this contest are pretty simple: Make an acrostic poem using your name/a word that means a lot to you. It could be your PMC username, your Minecraft IGN (you can exclude numbers/extra characters to make things easier), or any other word that means a lot to you (explain why it's important through the poem, of course).
Example
I'll be using my Minecraft IGN:
Caught up in a hurricane, life, flashing.
Hoped to take away the pain, strife, crashing.
Ripped apart from what once I knew,
Only to feel what once was true...
Nothing can change the broken mind.
After all, this is life, where anything,
Love, war, or the ultimate suffering, is
Going to be used
Against you, to prevent you from happiness.
(I know it's not great, but I was mainly focused on showing as many poetic styles as I could.)
Caught up in a hurricane, life, flashing.
Hoped to take away the pain, strife, crashing.
Ripped apart from what once I knew,
Only to feel what once was true...
Nothing can change the broken mind.
After all, this is life, where anything,
Love, war, or the ultimate suffering, is
Going to be used
Against you, to prevent you from happiness.
(I know it's not great, but I was mainly focused on showing as many poetic styles as I could.)
Judges:
Just me at the moment, but I think that's all I'll need.
Prizes:
1st Place: An opportunity to do a collab blog with me (if you want), a fair amount of diamonds, and a subscription
2nd Place: An interview conducted by me (if you want), a fair amount of diamonds, and a subscription
3rd Place: A fair amount of diamonds and a subscription
(If you place in any of these ranks and have Pokemon X/Y/OR/AS, I also have some bred Pokemon I might give ya.)
Deadline: March 5th at 11:59:59 PM CST
Hope y'all enjoy, and I can't wait to see what y'all write! If you have any questions, feel free to let me know. (= Also, if anyone would be willing to make trophies, I'd appreciate it.
Oh, one more thing: Just post it in a spoiler in a forum post. No need to make a blog out of it, because they're most likely going to be kinda short.
Current Participants:
TheHipster
OreoVal
Pikamoar
Tech Zero
TheyCallMeAidan
Zatharel
PixelCrash_
TehWormy
Paddy
Stingray_FTW
Leeanne
piratecraft
planetblox2000
RetroCityRampage
AkirAssasin
IAmSoLikeCalledTT
nightnday
Jetra
TheChipsandip
Tell your friends! (=
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Zatharel
-host one of these little poetry challenges myself in the near future, so keep an eye out. Two words: steam prizes.
??? cs:go skins included?
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Congrats :O (secret word was Testament )
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Congratulations everybody
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So chuffed that I got a mention. Better than I was hoping for.
Congrats to the winners, you really deserved it!
Congrats to the winners, you really deserved it!
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Gosh that's awesome Congrats to everyone; all of the entries were fantastic.
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wow, that was fast.
Congratulations, every single one of these were entirely deserved.
I'm especially proud of me2367, because in reality, all of us that placed top 3 are already well-known bloggers and well, it's not really that strange for us to get a placement in a poetry contest. However, for someone that writes a lot, but hasn't gotten on the map, he's shown me that blogging is not dead, that PMC still has a bright future.
/end speech
That all being said, I've decided to:
-host one of these little poetry challenges myself in the near future, so keep an eye out. Two words: steam prizes.
-continue writing myself. I was kind of bored of it, but hey. All I can say is bagels, yes, bagels.
Anyhow, do we get trophies n stuff, Chron? ._.
Congratulations, every single one of these were entirely deserved.
I'm especially proud of me2367, because in reality, all of us that placed top 3 are already well-known bloggers and well, it's not really that strange for us to get a placement in a poetry contest. However, for someone that writes a lot, but hasn't gotten on the map, he's shown me that blogging is not dead, that PMC still has a bright future.
/end speech
That all being said, I've decided to:
-host one of these little poetry challenges myself in the near future, so keep an eye out. Two words: steam prizes.
-continue writing myself. I was kind of bored of it, but hey. All I can say is bagels, yes, bagels.
Anyhow, do we get trophies n stuff, Chron? ._.
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Ow, I got a mention, that's better than I thought I'd get tbh
'Grats to all the winners, you did much better than I did
'Grats to all the winners, you did much better than I did
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Alrighty kiddos, after way too much deliberation between me, myself, and I (and a little assistance from one of my non-PMC friends), I have come to a conclusion as to the rankings of these poems.
As a preface, I just wanted to say that popularity had absolutely nothing to do with my choices. My non-PMC friend agreed with all of my choices without knowing who anyone was. This is solely based on my personal favorite poems.
And now, the results... I gotta say, this was really close. A phenomenal job by all three of you.
First Place:
The figurative language and rhythm are phenomenal. The message, while simple, is incredibly profound. I usually don't like it when it doesn't rhyme, but somehow you still made it so clean and elegant. I really, really, love it. Beautiful job.
Second Place:
Gosh, the emotion in this... It's so real. The descriptive wording is amazing, as well as the metaphor. I'm also a huge fan of the repetition used throughout, though I wish it could've been a tad more prevalent, as with the rhyming. Consistency and a bit of rhythm was all it lacked. I still really really like it. Great job. (=
Third Place:
This may sound weird, but I really like the choppiness of it. The metaphors/descriptive language/rhythm is great, as is the rhyme scheme (which is, admittedly, a tad subtle). One thing I feel this needs is... I'm not sure, honestly. It's a phenomenal poem, and all 3 of them really are, but it's just missing that... cohesion. That thing that just unifies it and amplifies the central message.
Honorable Mentions:
While your rhythm was probably the best of them all, and your metaphor was great, I feel like it lacked a bit of length, honestly. A little bit more could've gone a long way.
You were one of the very few to tell a complete story through your poem, and a really great one at that, but it just kinda fell apart in the end rhythm-wise, in my opinion. It's still good, but, like Pikamoar, could use a bit more length, in addition to a bit of consistency.
I do want to add, however, that I was impressed with the sheer amount of poetic talent that the entrants of this contest possessed. This was definitely not an easy judging for me. Thanks for participating, everyone! I hope to see more poetry out of many of y'all in the future!
As for the winners, your prizes will be delivered shortly, but no guarantees as to when.
As a preface, I just wanted to say that popularity had absolutely nothing to do with my choices. My non-PMC friend agreed with all of my choices without knowing who anyone was. This is solely based on my personal favorite poems.
And now, the results... I gotta say, this was really close. A phenomenal job by all three of you.
First Place:
IAmSoLikeCalledTT with Tear Drop:
Tsunami tides crashing down your cheek;
Escaping the fortress that is your face
Anger, envy, sadness, melancholy:
Released so much with just one tear.
Darkness found in the lightest places,
Realisations of past demons,
Overt manipulative schemes come into fruition:
People are so cynical.
Escaping the fortress that is your face
Anger, envy, sadness, melancholy:
Released so much with just one tear.
Darkness found in the lightest places,
Realisations of past demons,
Overt manipulative schemes come into fruition:
People are so cynical.
The figurative language and rhythm are phenomenal. The message, while simple, is incredibly profound. I usually don't like it when it doesn't rhyme, but somehow you still made it so clean and elegant. I really, really, love it. Beautiful job.
Second Place:
Zatharel with Tom and Jerry
To explain this nostalgic thought,
One must look into the sadness I've fought.
My innocent little cartoon turns into a pleasant memory, a memory of one.
A tragedy happened in the times of his illness,
Not even little Jerry knew, that on that day,
Death was coming to grab Tom, dragging him deep into the abyss.
Just sat there, that is what I did,
Even when mother came crying into the room.
Running from reality does not help,
Running from reality only leads to my own doom.
You will forever be in my heart, grandfather, forever my friend Tom.
One must look into the sadness I've fought.
My innocent little cartoon turns into a pleasant memory, a memory of one.
A tragedy happened in the times of his illness,
Not even little Jerry knew, that on that day,
Death was coming to grab Tom, dragging him deep into the abyss.
Just sat there, that is what I did,
Even when mother came crying into the room.
Running from reality does not help,
Running from reality only leads to my own doom.
You will forever be in my heart, grandfather, forever my friend Tom.
Gosh, the emotion in this... It's so real. The descriptive wording is amazing, as well as the metaphor. I'm also a huge fan of the repetition used throughout, though I wish it could've been a tad more prevalent, as with the rhyming. Consistency and a bit of rhythm was all it lacked. I still really really like it. Great job. (=
Third Place:
TheChipsandip with Chipsandip
Creative to others but not himself.
Hopes of being different than everyone else.
Intelligent thoughts and dumb ideas.
Pressured to sacrifice just to help.
Scared by stories, drawn by gore.
Always in one room with a locked door.
Never bothering to think a bit less.
Dark sided? No. Dimwitted? Yes.
International fame he wants but hates.
Perseverant with speed, but still feels too late.
Hopes of being different than everyone else.
Intelligent thoughts and dumb ideas.
Pressured to sacrifice just to help.
Scared by stories, drawn by gore.
Always in one room with a locked door.
Never bothering to think a bit less.
Dark sided? No. Dimwitted? Yes.
International fame he wants but hates.
Perseverant with speed, but still feels too late.
This may sound weird, but I really like the choppiness of it. The metaphors/descriptive language/rhythm is great, as is the rhyme scheme (which is, admittedly, a tad subtle). One thing I feel this needs is... I'm not sure, honestly. It's a phenomenal poem, and all 3 of them really are, but it's just missing that... cohesion. That thing that just unifies it and amplifies the central message.
Honorable Mentions:
Pikamoar with Ubuntu
Up the hill, venture into the trees
Buried beneath is a vault that is free
Upheaval of normal, plethora of amazing
Neath the soil, in a fountain that's blazing
To those who doubt, I tell you it's true
Under the soil, it's buried for you
Buried beneath is a vault that is free
Upheaval of normal, plethora of amazing
Neath the soil, in a fountain that's blazing
To those who doubt, I tell you it's true
Under the soil, it's buried for you
While your rhythm was probably the best of them all, and your metaphor was great, I feel like it lacked a bit of length, honestly. A little bit more could've gone a long way.
me2367 with Hollask
How it had come to this the mage was unsure.
Only last week all the world seemed so pure.
Looking upon it now those times seem long gone.
Lately the world had succumbed to the one.
As his armies had marched, so the lands did fall.
So the mad king did rule them all.
Killed were those from the royal hall
Only last week all the world seemed so pure.
Looking upon it now those times seem long gone.
Lately the world had succumbed to the one.
As his armies had marched, so the lands did fall.
So the mad king did rule them all.
Killed were those from the royal hall
You were one of the very few to tell a complete story through your poem, and a really great one at that, but it just kinda fell apart in the end rhythm-wise, in my opinion. It's still good, but, like Pikamoar, could use a bit more length, in addition to a bit of consistency.
I do want to add, however, that I was impressed with the sheer amount of poetic talent that the entrants of this contest possessed. This was definitely not an easy judging for me. Thanks for participating, everyone! I hope to see more poetry out of many of y'all in the future!
As for the winners, your prizes will be delivered shortly, but no guarantees as to when.
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Good luck everyone!
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ChronI was so surprised with the amount of quality entries in this contest, as well... I'm looking forward to many more of these contests (not all judged by me, of course). It gives me hope for the future. Maybe this site won't be completely enveloped by skinning and building...
Here, here.
Good luck to everyone, and a big thanks to Chron for holding the contest.
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I was so surprised with the amount of quality entries in this contest, as well... I'm looking forward to many more of these contests (not all judged by me, of course). It gives me hope for the future. Maybe this site won't be completely enveloped by skinning and building...
Judging should be done before the end of the day. Good luck to you all! Trophies might be a little late, CheeseQuizIndeed is going to be making them.
Judging should be done before the end of the day. Good luck to you all! Trophies might be a little late, CheeseQuizIndeed is going to be making them.
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I was actually thinking of starting up blogs.
The problem is.
I'm so boring.
The problem is.
I'm so boring.
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Who would have known a poetry contest would get so many entries? I'm impressed, there haven't been this many entries in a single community challenge involving writing in a long while.
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To shed some light on that, poetry has taken a come back during the turn of the century. There was a great decline in the art of writing the mastery of our language. It was only with in the past 20 years people have started to acknowledge the beauty behind our language that we speak everyday. I hope more people take part in the things we take for granted.
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Perhaps in order to spread the beauty of poetry here on PMC we should do more of these little challenges, both for personal enjoyment and a little prestige.
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Cheers to that! It's great to expect something else in the community contest forum other than plain skinning or building contests (not that I'm against them).
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Much of a caring person, so kind and giving.
One to go to in a time of sorrow or fails,
This person will always listen to your stories and tales.
Having a touch gentle and sweet,
Even one who always heeds,
Right by your side in your time in need.
One to go to in a time of sorrow or fails,
This person will always listen to your stories and tales.
Having a touch gentle and sweet,
Even one who always heeds,
Right by your side in your time in need.
I chose this word because of my own mother, who always cares and is always there.
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I shall use, muh username!
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They say it roams the woods
Haunting the trespassers,
Eyes on it's prey.
Head high,
It sets off,
Prying, it's eyes,
Satisfying, the cries,
Trapped.
Eagle, I am
Ready, I am
Haunting the trespassers,
Eyes on it's prey.
Head high,
It sets off,
Prying, it's eyes,
Satisfying, the cries,
Trapped.
Eagle, I am
Ready, I am
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First up thanks for sending the reminder Chron, I completely forgot about this.
I shall be using my minecraft Ign (Hollask) for this.
I shall be using my minecraft Ign (Hollask) for this.
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How it had come to this the mage was unsure.
Only last week all the world seemed so pure.
Looking upon it now those times seem long gone.
Lately the world had succumbed to the one.
As his armies had marched, so the lands did fall.
So the mad king did rule them all.
Killed were those from the royal hall
Only last week all the world seemed so pure.
Looking upon it now those times seem long gone.
Lately the world had succumbed to the one.
As his armies had marched, so the lands did fall.
So the mad king did rule them all.
Killed were those from the royal hall
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nightndayClick to revealGiving light to ones own fate
Radiant but true the moon shines bright
Ancient yet not forgotten you stand
Never having doubt you sway gentle heart
Dreaming about the moments to remember
Forever in the souls of open arms
Another day for atonement
Then take me in the moment
How much will be remembered.
Elegance doesn't fade
Reality dies hard.
A wild Grandmaster Competitor has appeared!
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Then the style you are thinking about is called a Name poem not a acrostic, but I made several poems so here is my back up... I guess you could call it. Although I liked the first one better. This poem ends in a couplet, and can also be viewed as a Elegy.
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Giving light to ones own fate
Radiant but true the moon shines bright
Ancient yet not forgotten you stand
Never having doubt you sway gentle heart
Dreaming about the moments to remember
Forever in the souls of open arms
Another day for atonement
Then take me in the moment
How much will be remembered.
Elegance doesn't fade
Reality dies hard.
Radiant but true the moon shines bright
Ancient yet not forgotten you stand
Never having doubt you sway gentle heart
Dreaming about the moments to remember
Forever in the souls of open arms
Another day for atonement
Then take me in the moment
How much will be remembered.
Elegance doesn't fade
Reality dies hard.
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oooh this is my personal favorite so far, I assume an Elegy is the same thing as "елегија" where I come from which is basically a sad poem dedicated to a lost person, lost youth, sorrow for your country etc etc?
Anddd time's up. Hopefully judging will be wrapped up soon, considering Chron is the only judge.
Anddd time's up. Hopefully judging will be wrapped up soon, considering Chron is the only judge.
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You've still got today, the deadline is 11:59:59 PM Central Standard Time.
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An Acrostic Doesn't have to be the first letter in a sentence, Most notably it can be rhythmic in the verse and can have a slight puzzle towards it. That is up to the Poets preference really. If you have a question on the formatting let me know.
This Poem is dedicated towards my grandFather. Though he has passed now; his heart will ever live on.
This Poem is dedicated towards my grandFather. Though he has passed now; his heart will ever live on.
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Gallant man with passion of life
Bold radiance revolves around you
You extend arms to loving sons
But the tyrant never sees level ground
Absence of unseen presence drowns the body
For you are one with caring love
No after shadow ever looms
When unrequited tears dry
Swaying so many hearts with subtle smile
Words not said don't end in silence
Feelings shine bright with past relations light
Love is time
By: night
Bold radiance revolves around you
You extend arms to loving sons
But the tyrant never sees level ground
Absence of unseen presence drowns the body
For you are one with caring love
No after shadow ever looms
When unrequited tears dry
Swaying so many hearts with subtle smile
Words not said don't end in silence
Feelings shine bright with past relations light
Love is time
By: night
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For this contest, I would really like it if all the letters began each of the lines. I know that most acrostics don't require that, but for simplicity's sake, I do. While this is quite a beautiful poem, in order to be eligible, it needs to be rewritten.
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Ubuntu
Up the hill, venture into the trees
Buried beneath is a vault that is free
Upheaval of normal, plethora of amazing
Neath the soil, in a fountain that's blazing
To those who doubt, I tell you it's true
Under the soil, it's buried for you
Buried beneath is a vault that is free
Upheaval of normal, plethora of amazing
Neath the soil, in a fountain that's blazing
To those who doubt, I tell you it's true
Under the soil, it's buried for you
This doesn't really follow the normal thought process, so I'll elucidate a little. The ideology behind it is that Ubuntu is a lesser known system, but it still is a very viable method of utilizing your computer.
So most of it is an allegory.
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I'm definitely interested in being a part of this... I just posted my poetry collection yesterday in a blog. I guess doing a poem for this would be cool too. I wish I new about this earlier seeing as how i have a Villanelle poem due for a interview tomorrow
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I'm really close to being done with mine, but it's kinda (really) cheesy
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To explain this nostalgic thought,
One must look into the sadness I've fought.
My innocent little cartoon turns into a pleasant memory, a memory of one.
A tragedy happened in the times of his illness,
Not even little Jerry knew, that on that day,
Death was coming to grab Tom, dragging him deep into the abyss.
Just sat there, that is what I did,
Even when mother came crying into the room.
Running from reality does not help,
Running from reality only leads to my own doom.
You will forever be in my heart, grandfather, forever my friend Tom.
Chron, please don't EVER get me to write something like this again. I'm not sure I did good, but I did my best and that's really what matters.
One must look into the sadness I've fought.
My innocent little cartoon turns into a pleasant memory, a memory of one.
A tragedy happened in the times of his illness,
Not even little Jerry knew, that on that day,
Death was coming to grab Tom, dragging him deep into the abyss.
Just sat there, that is what I did,
Even when mother came crying into the room.
Running from reality does not help,
Running from reality only leads to my own doom.
You will forever be in my heart, grandfather, forever my friend Tom.
Chron, please don't EVER get me to write something like this again. I'm not sure I did good, but I did my best and that's really what matters.
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My entry, hopefully not too long
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Going to great lengths to serve and protect
Unwavering in their duty
Always ready and prepared for any event
Rigorous and stable in their stance
Defenders of all, protecting who they can
Illuminating every heart they come across
Among the people for the people
Never giving up, even when all might be lost
Unwavering in their duty
Always ready and prepared for any event
Rigorous and stable in their stance
Defenders of all, protecting who they can
Illuminating every heart they come across
Among the people for the people
Never giving up, even when all might be lost
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Congrats on 210 subs! Such a cool idea for a contest, and even better is the prospect of collabing with you in a blog.
Teardrop - my acrostic (idek why the theme to be honest; I just thought the subject matter was indulging.)
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Tsunami tides crashing down your cheek;
Escaping the fortress that is your face
Anger, envy, sadness, melancholy:
Released so much with just one tear.
Darkness found in the lightest places,
Realisations of past demons,
Overt manipulative schemes come into fruition:
People are so cynical.
Escaping the fortress that is your face
Anger, envy, sadness, melancholy:
Released so much with just one tear.
Darkness found in the lightest places,
Realisations of past demons,
Overt manipulative schemes come into fruition:
People are so cynical.
Teardrop - my acrostic (idek why the theme to be honest; I just thought the subject matter was indulging.)
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Does the poem have to describe the word that we are using?
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It needs to describe how this word relates to you and your story, or your story in itself.
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Does it have to be specifically one word? I've got an idea but it involves 3 words :p
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It can be any length you want, but preferably less than 16 characters. (You do you, bro.)
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Mine was three words xP, as long as it's not very long
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My entry:
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Never has there been a thing with such beauty unrivalled.
A golden sun that rises over an emerald hill.
Trees that sprout ever upwards into the bright sky.
Under our feet, glowing crystals that drift in the eternal darkness.
Red flowers that bloom in a flowing field.
Elegance that no man can hope to match.
A golden sun that rises over an emerald hill.
Trees that sprout ever upwards into the bright sky.
Under our feet, glowing crystals that drift in the eternal darkness.
Red flowers that bloom in a flowing field.
Elegance that no man can hope to match.
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My trump card poem xP (Find the hidden word! Last letter capitalised as a hint)(IGN)
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Dust and ash of son form
Eternal spirit, body torn,
Sin to be God's storm...
Towards everlasting should trust and merit every newborn inheriT.
In all of new deed and good will
Now in each cell, one who instils
Yields a path that life moves until...
Eternal spirit, body torn,
Sin to be God's storm...
Towards everlasting should trust and merit every newborn inheriT.
In all of new deed and good will
Now in each cell, one who instils
Yields a path that life moves until...
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Cries of beasts echo above,
Roars of dragons as they dove.
Enigmas waiting to be unfold,
All within a tought of gold!
Treasure that all can use,
Infinite and diverse, they accuse.
Vile yet exciting as New Year's Eve,
It usually depends on your belief.
Take my words and harvest this fey, and
You shall rule the day!
Roars of dragons as they dove.
Enigmas waiting to be unfold,
All within a tought of gold!
Treasure that all can use,
Infinite and diverse, they accuse.
Vile yet exciting as New Year's Eve,
It usually depends on your belief.
Take my words and harvest this fey, and
You shall rule the day!
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Well, I'd rather do this than debate over a dress. (IGN Name)
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Creative to others but not himself.
Hopes of being different than everyone else.
Intelligent thoughts and dumb ideas.
Pressured to sacrifice just to help.
Scared by stories, drawn by gore.
Always in one room with a locked door.
Never bothering to think a bit less.
Dark sided? No. Dimwitted? Yes.
International fame he wants but hates.
Perseverant with speed, but still feels too late.
Hopes of being different than everyone else.
Intelligent thoughts and dumb ideas.
Pressured to sacrifice just to help.
Scared by stories, drawn by gore.
Always in one room with a locked door.
Never bothering to think a bit less.
Dark sided? No. Dimwitted? Yes.
International fame he wants but hates.
Perseverant with speed, but still feels too late.
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Me shall join.
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Ok, Bam
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Ridiculously
Entertaining
The
Retro
Odyssey
Cat
In
Teacups in
Your
Rancid
Apple tree
Motel in
Paris for
Apples for the
Gods in
England
Entertaining
The
Retro
Odyssey
Cat
In
Teacups in
Your
Rancid
Apple tree
Motel in
Paris for
Apples for the
Gods in
England
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Bookmarking, and later, entering.
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I fancy trying my hand here.
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pirates are mean
islands are green
racks are black
a man was creeping a
tiger was stalking a deer
eating some green grass
coming along a waters the
raft was a going
at sea
flowing along the reef
taking a sip of tea
islands are green
racks are black
a man was creeping a
tiger was stalking a deer
eating some green grass
coming along a waters the
raft was a going
at sea
flowing along the reef
taking a sip of tea
lol, i know its stupid but i thought i'd try it out
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I'm so good with words totes joining
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I'm pretty good with words, might have a chance. I'll enter
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I shall have to enter this so.
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Greater than everyone else, I
Only make you guys want to die
Ready for everything is me
Darn I'm so gosh darn swaggy
OMG I am so cool
Nah, I'm really just a fool
Only make you guys want to die
Ready for everything is me
Darn I'm so gosh darn swaggy
OMG I am so cool
Nah, I'm really just a fool
Sorry for the terrible poem XD Got up early, I was tired, bored, figured I'd do the poem.. and this is what I came up with in about 30 seconds off the top of my head XD
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