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Story Battle Master G Vs. MonorailblueS
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Hey Guys Whats Up? Today You Are Going To Vote For Some Story Battles About Who's Story Was Best.Please Don't Vote Unless You Have Fully Read The 2 Storys.
Our Theme Was Second Death
Master G's : Lego Ninjago Ep.55? Second Death. http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/lego-ninjago-ep55-second-death/
Mono's : Red Pier. http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/-red-pier-story-battle-with-master-g-/
Don't Look At The Video On Monos Because It Has To Be Judged By The Story
Please Do Not Judge A Book By Its Cover
Our Theme Was Second Death
Master G's : Lego Ninjago Ep.55? Second Death. http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/lego-ninjago-ep55-second-death/
Mono's : Red Pier. http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/-red-pier-story-battle-with-master-g-/
Don't Look At The Video On Monos Because It Has To Be Judged By The Story
Please Do Not Judge A Book By Its Cover
Poll ended 09/25/2015 12:35 pm.
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Welp, the poll ended, and I guess I won.
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Congrats! ^^
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Do I need to bump this again?
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Well, I have to do it.
*bump*
*bump*
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I don't watch Ninjago anymore and I don't really understand the concept of Master G's story. On the other hand, I think Mono's was more understandable to me.
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I gotta give my vote to Mono, sorry Master G plz don't hurt me ;-;
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Oh, ends in five days.
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I dunno XD
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Say, when does this poll end?
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I'm afraid I have to vote for Mono, simply because I found it too difficult to read Master G's story. It may well be that there is nothing wrong with it as you say, but the problem is there's no way for me to tell without hurting my, sadly, mortal eyeballs.
If it's become a habit, maybe it's time to break the habit, suffice it to say
Formatting is probably a key thing here as well, for both entries, but I've said my piece already I'll shut up
If it's become a habit, maybe it's time to break the habit, suffice it to say
Formatting is probably a key thing here as well, for both entries, but I've said my piece already I'll shut up
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ZatharelMaster G I quite literally have nothing to say. I understood nothing from your story and the capitals on every word: a) hurt my head b) are incorrect in every way.
On the other hand, Mono, I really recommend an easier formatting, a single paragraph for a single part is quite..eh...hard to read.
^ Totally agree. Though I did not spot the few grammar mistakes... Zath has sharp eyes.
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And because Master G said to, I'll vote for him.
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XD
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Nice job, both of you. My vote goes to Mono though.
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Master G I quite literally have nothing to say. I understood nothing from your story and the capitals on every word: a) hurt my head b) are incorrect in every way.
On the other hand, Mono, I'd like to congratulate you. Regardless of who wins this via the poll, you've proven to be able to handle a difficult theme well. I did notice a mix up in the tenses, though in concept (which these days is all I care about honestly), your story is quite nice. For next time, I really recommend an easier formatting, a single paragraph for a single part is quite..eh...hard to read.
On a side note, you've inspired me to use my own theme to write something, so thank you for that.
On the other hand, Mono, I'd like to congratulate you. Regardless of who wins this via the poll, you've proven to be able to handle a difficult theme well. I did notice a mix up in the tenses, though in concept (which these days is all I care about honestly), your story is quite nice. For next time, I really recommend an easier formatting, a single paragraph for a single part is quite..eh...hard to read.
On a side note, you've inspired me to use my own theme to write something, so thank you for that.
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Uhh The Capitals Can't Judge A Book I'm Mean Theres Nothing Wrong With It.
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I have to agree with Zath on this one; preceding every word with a capital letter is both incorrect english and looks particularly spammy on the page, making it hard to read. I also must disagree that grammar like this shouldn't be considered when judging a book; in actual fact, I feel like it should play a sizeable role in the judging.
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Yeah But I Mean I Can't Stop This Is Too Much Of A Habit
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Thank you, writing senpai. *bows*
