Unsure Writer

CaelChan11/27/17 9:40 pm history
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12/4/2017 7:11 pm
So before I started skinning, I was an avid writer, even though I am untalented potato, mainly writing random stuff that would come about in my head. I posted one of my first, not so good pieces of writing on skindex, and apparently people liked it?? I was thinking bout posting one on here, but having a hard time picking one. Can you guys help me?

Update: Can't believe I'm actually getting feedback :O I'll probably end up posting all of these stories, now it's just a matter of what order. Prob will do the top 2 at once and update them 1-2 times a week.

Note: These are meant to be summaries, so they will be shorter and to the point. Of course when I write it will be more colorful!

Desc of stories:

My Best Friend Is a Demon:
Jynx and Celeste were inseparable lifelong friends. Both of them lived normal lives until the age of 16, when Celeste mysteriously disappeared. Determined to find her friend, Ivory began doing everything she could to find a hint, a trace of what happened. This leads her to becoming involved with the Yokai (Demon) Extermination Association (YEA) and learning she’s a descendant of a powerful YEA hunter. There she finds that it that Celeste had been kidnapped, not missing. Ivory strikes out to find what really happened, and realizes she’s not alone in her search. She teams up with Kace, who's looking for his friend Devon. They soon come face to face with many demons and find they are not what they seemed.. Jynx and Kace keep finding pieces of the past that don’t add up. What will they do when they learn that Celeste and Devon had lied to them all their lives?

Soul Mate:

2000 years ago, humans fell to Endea, a world full of wonder and mystery. Finding no way back, they decided to set up settlement in hopes that help would come to them. There was one problem though. Monstrous beasts would come in the night and kill a few of the settlers, finding their meat delicious. The settlers became panicked and tried everything they could to keep those beasts out. But it was futile. Within a year more than 80% of the population was dead. But then their saving grace arrived: The Elve. They showed the settlers how to kill the beasts and protect them under one condition: every 100 years the settlers would have to give the Elve one maiden to be at their mercy.

It’s been 10 years since World War 3 started, and the US is getting tired. So they resort to their last ditch effort to end the war, by using the Twin Operation. Ever since the radioactive bombs, twins, have been powerful. One twin sucks out the life force of the other, leaving it stronger. In order to counter this, the weakened twin mutates, and becomes able to control the stronger twin’s motions. Therefore, the strengthened twin becomes the perfect soldier, and the weaker the perfect commander. Deep underground, this logic is being tested, using children as the test subjects. Meet Trent, Veronica, Lorac and Kora, who had everything taken from them, wiped clean, and forced to play in this sick game.

The Lies Within:
The kingdom of Divitae has flourished ever since the king cracked down on security, demanded the strictest of policies, limiting freedom and punishing anyone who stepped out of line. The king had one son, Alexander, and groomed him to be his successor, teaching him to rule with an iron fist. But Alex didn’t want to live like that. So when his traveling carriage gets attacked by a single mercenary, he doesn’t put up a fight except to beg for his men to be spared. To his surprise, the attacker complies with his plea, instead making sure the men were secure and unharmed before dragging him away. He soon begins to fall in love with the freedom of the outskirts, and at the same time, he learns of the true state of the country from his kidnapper, one of the most feared mercenaries Exo. But can he go back to that prison of a castle, dance the game of politics to change the country for the better, if it means never running free along the grassy plains ever again?

Laste Hope - Zombie Apocolypse
The world died 10 years ago. No one knows what happened, only that the dead stopped staying dead. Most of the population died off within a year. Among the few who survived is a young gunner, who goes by the name Myst. No one knows where she came from, only that her sharpshooting is second to none, and that she had managed to create a safe haven from the undead. Ivory and Drake have been searching for this haven for as long as they could remember. A place where they wouldn't be on the run, a place to call home. Oh, they've heard all about Myst, and the Big 7. The most elite of warriors, escorting survivors and scavengers to safety. So when they actually run into her, it seems like a dream come true. But like all dreams, they have to come to an end.

Sry for such a long post~

Poll ended 12/04/2017 12:17 am.

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12/04/2017 7:11 pm
Level 66 : High Grandmaster Sweetheart
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Thanks everyone for voting and replying, the winners are Test and My Best Friend is a Demon. I'll most likely upload 1-2 times every week, maybe more if I get into a writing mood. Stay tuned for the stories! ^^
11/28/2017 5:19 pm
Level 18 : Journeyman Scribe
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I feel as though the wording in these stories could be a bit more colorful and engaging to read. Aside from that, they show quite a lot of promise and I'd love to see them all posted in full.
11/28/2017 12:55 am
Level 67 : High Grandmaster Necromancer
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Alright I've confirmed that I'm a sicko as I really like Test xD
11/27/2017 11:15 pm
Level 2 : Apprentice Artist
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All! :D
11/27/2017 9:45 pm
Level 35 : Artisan Pokemon
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Hmm... I often face the same predicament from time to time. If it were me, I'd go with the one that seems to captivate your mind the most, as that will make it easier and more satisfying to write. I honestly can't make this decision for you, as these are your stories, and only you can make them great.
11/27/2017 9:42 pm
Level 46 : Master Cowboy
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... Why not post all of them?
11/27/2017 10:18 pm
Level 11 : Journeyman Network
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I agree with you all of them should be posted.
11/27/2017 9:49 pm
Level 35 : Artisan Pokemon
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True. Unless it's graphic. That's why over half my story ideas are not on this website. Or written anywhere else.
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