I'm not sure you'd even want us to comment on your build, but let me tell you something
It's a great build for beginners, but making a video about it And calling it a 'timelapse' when it isn't. Well, maybe just practice building a little more, or focus on making prettier cinematic videos of your builds.

Eitherway. Keep making stuff like this, and practice it. You can do a lot better than this!