Being a successful youtuber, here are some tips for you.
-Avoid using a recording software that has a watermark (bandicam). I would use Fraps, but if you`re not in the mood for downloading and pirating that (if you wanted to pirate it), Download Microsoft Recorder, and Format Factory. The bad thing is that Microsoft saves it`s video files in a different format. So you use Format Factory to change it to a AVI. It`s decent in quality, audio, and no watermark.
- Be specific. "If this tutorial helped , please, rate, comment and sub " is not XD Try to explain things as short as possible, but still covering everything up. Also include the download links to Minecraft, Tekkit (since I see you doing tekkit) in your description. Work on your channel desc.!
- Avoid tekkit. It's popular, but not as popular as Minecraft. Stick to vanilla until your audience has grown large enough. Then playing Tekkit will attract some viewers, but not the most.