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    08/21/2013 5:02 pm
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    Im gonna try this tournament again. Lets see if I can get better in this.
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    08/17/2013 9:43 pm
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    I think I gotten everyone's request with the exception of some that were either deleted for some reason. I'm talking to xX_Jess_xX and minitrixer here. yours were deleted. Good I guess?

    I also gotten some different requests other than skins and texture packs. I'm gonna go thru these first before the resource pack reviews.

    @zipnwizz, you look fabulous! 10/10

    @CleverUserName01, though I made a story before, I never tried to judge someone's story. I'll try to see if I can do it...

    It's such a short story, but nice description on the scenes. The concept of the plot is good for me but nothing blew me away. 7.5/10? Well, I see why I don't review stories.

    Now finally to the resource packs!

    Mine Velvet (1.6.2) (16x16)
    To hopper131313,
    Presentation:

    Let’s take a look at your texture pack! The pictures and front image are interesting. What I’m intrigued about is the information about it. You go further by telling where you get your inspirations and even crediting other people. The guis and buttons have great colors. But here’s the part I won’t say anything positive, the font. It tries to make it pop out of the buttons, but it’s more distracting for me. I can’t run for 10 seconds in creative mode without looking at the ridiculous font when I’m trying to get a block, but I gotten used to it and it’s worth it. It’s so different and unique. I say keep the font, but the health bar needs changing though just because I didn’t even know it was a health bar when I looked at it the first time.
    8.4/10
    Blocks:

    The terrain here is more realistic with a sense of fantasy than modern. Its actually more like a reboot of the default resource pack. It’s a simple idea but It’s a great simple idea. The architecture is more decent to my eyes. There’s barely any contrast to these building blocks. But the main concern I have is the underground texture. The stone is unrealistically smooth, which make the ores look fake and no one likes fake diamond ores. There are some blocks that stand out like the obsidian, nether blocks, and wood, but there’s a huge hole filled with ok blocks like the sand and dispenser that need to get contrast. Your lava though looks decent, just contrast it.
    7.2/10
    Mobs:

    So the mobs in this resource pack are making this more of a “vanilla reboot”. Most of the mobs look the exactly the same but with enhanced features. Some do work like the zombies but some looks like u added a coat of gray paint on it. Contrast seems to be your worst enemy. On the side note, what happened to the villager’s significant nose? They look more human! Even the iron golem turning into a real boy. Strange idea but fits the theme well.
    7.9/10
    Items:

    The items… oh just name your resource pack “The Vanilla Reboot Resource Pack”. They look more enhanced than their counterparts. The ones that are unique does stand out especially the spear gun. The weaponry and armor are good and the rest feels like that. This resource pack overall is just good in general, but for a theme of realism, It does well totally. I forgot to mention that the art pieces there makes the theme kinda more of the modern feel.
    8.7/10
    Total: 8.1/10 for a great reboot of the vanilla resource pack with enhanced features but a lack of strong contrast


    Vivid Torrential Changes (16x16)
    To insomniac_lemon
    Presentation:

    Alright, lets dig into this thing here. Pictures are promising, information is good. Ah you claimed that this is an old texture pack from 2 years ago. I reckon you had a lot of time to make yours outstanding. The guis and font looks great above the interesting background. The first problem I encountered was the “Minecraft” in the title screen. Can’t you make the letters more thick? The other guis look outstanding with the design layout of all guis that exist in the game.
    9.2/10
    Blocks:

    When you give it that vivid, happy theme, you go over the top. The terrain and architecture blocks are so colorful and happy that I don’t even rage quit to creepers! The pattern of the blocks are very unique and diverse from each other, but I’m being too nice about it not because of the happy theme to it but because there’s small repetition on the ores. They have the same pattern. Give it variety like you did to the other blocks.
    9.6/10
    Mobs
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    The mobs here are wonderful. The friendly mobs look more better than their counterparts. The sheep’s eyes are enormous but the villager’s from space surprise me even more. I will talk about the sounds later but the way they look, incredible. This is what I thought the villagers are like to me; weird things. The iron golem just looks so different. The head is like a tiny leaf with a smiley face. Its strange, but interesting. One thing that is bad though is the snow golem with the pumpkin head. The jack lantern design is not working it for me. It looks flat and not 3-D.
    9.3/10
    Items: (Compass and day-night timer is not functioning)

    Items are a plus. The 3-d look of them are stunning and most are just creative. The floppy disks are just funny to me for some reason and the animations are great. There 1 technical fault on this and it is the leather armor. Its broken since I cannot dye it to a new color. No red armor for me today. The armor and weapons are not unique when compared to the blocks. Maybe try give the tools and weapon a different shape.
    8.8/10
    Music and Sound:
    The sound just makes the atmosphere more humorous. The way the aliens sound and the zombies makes me chuckle a bit. I don’t have much to say about it but it’s a well done in my books
    9/10
    Total: 9.2/10 for intriguing use of a vivid and happy theme on the resource pack with surprising patterns and layouts.
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    08/14/2013 1:17 pm
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    Well I keep no promises, but I am back with reviews. I will keep reviewing resource packs by starting off with 2. I will finish the other request I can tell you that, but i cannot guarantee you when it'll be done. Now lets start off by saying...
    @Bobbinz, I cannot review your texture pack again for 2 reasons.
    1. I already done it 2 times.
    2. The feedback was awful with no improvements from the last review.

    and @Mr_Trl, your texture pack is gone, nowhere to be found.

    Red-Moon (32x32)
    To 300AB,

    Presentation:
    Let’s see what this has to offer… oh haha I get it, it’s a red moon. By the looks of it, the color palette is similar to the default resource pack. The presentation looks promising already, IF it actually 100% done. The gui’s is dull but has a sleek, modern design. I feel like some of the gui like the creative one looks incomplete, but overall, It works for the other colors of the resource pack.
    8.6/10
    Blocks:
    The blocks are like the faithful pack, no it is the faithful pack, but with dull colors. Both terrain and architecture are vague and doesn’t show colorful features. The worse problem you have with this is the inconsistency of theme. I thought this is an HD remake of the default but some of the blocks look like it belongs to a new theme, like the ore blocks. They look amazing, but it mostly belongs to a medieval theme. Also, some of the blocks aren’t finish. Maybe finish making the nether blocks or the new blocks for 1.6. Maybe try to think of a new theme that belongs with ALL the blocks.
    6.8/10
    Mobs:
    (No rating since the majority of the mobs is incomplete. I will give you credit for the nice color for the slime, but I will give you thumbs down for an awful remake of the creeper and zombie.)
    Items:
    (No rating again for the same reason.)
    Total: 5.0/10 for incompletion of work and lack of theme. You lied to me about being 100%! That’s not good!
    MechaniCraft 1.6 (16x16)
    To eliminer01,
    Presentation:
    Ok I got some mixed feelings with this one. Though I wasn’t proud of the front pic you used and how I can’t see your other pictures, but the backstory is interesting. It’s a great way to know what this resource pack is all about! Since I do like a post-apocalyptic pack and the 100% completion, I’m hyped out checking this out. First off, the guis here are well designed. I liked how the names changed too to give it that theme. This is going to be a good review I hope…
    9.3/10
    Blocks:

    The terrain is wonderful. The colors that affect the landscape and clouds really show that apocalyptic feel. I also laughed on the radioactive can replacing the cactus. The thing that bothers me the most is the cobweb. It’s all Red with no resemblance to a web. The architecture though is bad. The colors it has and the contrast is not close to represent the theme. The ores are cheap looking. Maybe adding some age will make it more like an ore. The coals bother me the most though. I don’t know what it supposed to be like the pumpkins you remade.
    6.4/10
    Mobs:

    There are some unique mobs and the not so unique. The dangerous mobs are very different from their counterparts. They are great designs except for the zombie. It just looks too strange to me. Mostly they look like a failed attempt at robots. The friendly mobs are okay. They don’t look mutated as the other mobs. The chickens though, awesome job with them. The red eyes got my attention.
    8/10
    Items:

    Look at all the the items, and the different names. This is what I’m talking about for a resource pack! There’s much to talk about here. The arrow and bow are replaced with a plasma gun. The weapons have creative names. The armors are excellent… But some of the items are not done yet. Probably in the next update you can fix that since you said you’re all done with your resource pack. The negative side is though is some items could use some shading.
    9/10
    Total: 8.2/10 for a creative theme done with creative items and mobs with a disastrous result of the blocks.
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    07/31/2013 1:30 am
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    I'm sincerely sorry for keeping you guys waiting for me. I didn't even know that this topic is still going strong! I will continue critiquing your resource packs and skins! Just give me a day or 2 and I will post of what I think about your stuff. Thank you for your patience, and thanks eliminer01 for reviving this thread as I forgotten this exists.
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    07/17/2013 8:59 pm
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    Check out these skins from me and my opponent, pikamoar. I think someone should judge these skins.

    Pikamoar's skin

    http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/chain-clad-warrior-2323838/

    Gms+'s skin

    http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/alan-the-newbie-warrior-in-armor/
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    07/16/2013 5:51 pm
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    I was thinking this idea. In the next skinning tournament when people are competing for best skin, I think there should be judges here to rate the skins to see which one is better. If enough judges vote for the skins, they will be a winner. The idea for most diamonds, favorites, etc should still be there if the judges cannot decide on the winner.
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    07/15/2013 7:42 pm
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    My opponent is not responding ever since i ask him to respond 2 days ago. Idk what I can do.
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    07/14/2013 12:24 pm
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    07/13/2013 3:02 pm
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    I love this idea. This definitely helps people increase their skills in skinning.
    I'm in!
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    07/12/2013 7:43 pm
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    07/12/2013 2:11 am
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    Heres my entry! Hopefully this is right on time.

    http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/kate-the-jewel-warrior/

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    07/10/2013 5:50 pm
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    Its hard to choose the best block/item in minecraft, but for items, it has to be diamond because They are very useful for weapons, tools, armor, and enchantment. Though they are very sneaky, its worth it.

    My favorite block's gotta be the iron block. I always use this because they are easier to make when making a beacon or an iron golem.
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    07/10/2013 12:38 am
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    I'm crazy for 3rd gen pokemon.

    My favorite starter is torchic, just because it'll be a blaziken!

    But my favorite pokemon is strangely Gliscor, which is 4th gen.
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    07/09/2013 5:13 pm
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    Oh yea, I'm interesting on the topic. Let alone I'm very good with texture packs and skins. Count me in!
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    07/09/2013 2:13 am
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    Interesting topic. Im on it!
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    07/08/2013 11:22 pm
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    What can I say about this? Let me start off with the 1st piece.

    Well, that's excellent. The way you shade it really makes it one of a kind. The contrast is so well done, so defined, it gives it more out of a character. I have to give creds to you for keeping it black and white. Maybe make it more monochromatic like probably adding brown to add some hint of color. Overall, Looks great and funny too.

    2nd one, It's alright. All you did is add some props for the pikachu family, which is not that bad. The linework could improve and maybe cell-shading won't hurt you a bit. But, I still like it. Its cool and nice.
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    07/08/2013 11:08 pm
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    Who dares step out and face the great skin maker?



    You must create an assassin of some sort. Lets see what you come up with.
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    07/08/2013 6:58 pm
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    Well, the video is exciting since I for one never use mods before that altered the gameplay. The way you reacted to brand new things.. I would do the exact thing. Your funny at some moments and the timing is well put. But I think you should let your subscribers choose your fate or something extreme. But yea, excellent video! Can't wait to watch more.
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    07/08/2013 12:09 am
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    http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-blackbird/

    Here's my entry! Go figure out what to do with it.

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    07/07/2013 10:24 pm
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    I've got competition, pretty tough ones too! Yes, i'm pointing fingers at you guys!

    But I'm in!

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