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Aathos-Temple of the gods [Deep Academy Application]

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LeScary's Avatar LeScary
Level 39 : Artisan Toast
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Hello guys,Scary again!
This time I bring you my latest creation,Aathos.
I was looking to join DeepBlock for a long time ever since I joined PMC but I knew my skills were...lacking.
But now after some years and build progress I have the skills(maybe)to enter the Academy!
The only issue the build is hollow,I hope you dont mind because the temples itself dont have entrances...
*play in peacefull mode*
Short story...
Long ago,in a distant land.There lived a grand architech which built like no other.Onde day after the architect made the temple the gods grew jelaous of his skill and took the temples right off the lands itself.To stop the temples from floating themselfs away the gods put chains on the flying land the temples stand on.Since then time passed and the architect died from old years but the temples,still to this day,looking like new...

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RebirthOfShien
09/17/2014 8:19 am
Level 56 : Grandmaster Architect
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Its quite repetetive imo
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Schnogot
09/12/2014 11:39 pm
Level 67 : High Grandmaster Architect
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agreed with below...too similar to rambo :/
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Zephen
09/12/2014 5:20 pm
Level 22 : Expert Pony
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This is brilliant! Definitely needs more exsposure! Diamond!
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LeScary
09/12/2014 5:12 pm
Level 39 : Artisan Toast
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I really appreciate the creativ critiscism.I didnt think about my "cliche" so sorry about it!
I hope Il try my best next time but for now thanks for commenting!
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F4llenW4rlord
09/12/2014 4:49 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Pixel Painter
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The build is very square, and very plain and repetitive. The technique for depth here is good, but repeated too much. As well, judging from the previous comments, this is inspired by another build.

I checked out the build, and it is the same as this one. Apart from the colours. If you want to impress the Deep Academy with a build, an original build would do better. As well, try to make the building more interesting in the shape and the palette.
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That old kid
09/12/2014 4:31 pm
Level 66 : High Grandmaster Artist
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You need to work on your concept scaryman. If you want to be noticed for an application you have to reach outside the typical cliche of building!
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ItisaCloud
09/12/2014 4:10 pm
Level 45 : Master Batman
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LeScary
09/12/2014 4:21 pm
Level 39 : Artisan Toast
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I got the inspiration from that exact build,but its not copied xD
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Meester Curly
09/12/2014 6:13 pm
Level 55 : Grandmaster Architect
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its pretty damn similar though lol
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frozenintime
09/12/2014 2:53 pm
Level 34 : Artisan Electrician
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I feel like the build is a little too square. Also I'd try to improve the hovering ice thing above to something with a better pattern :)
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