Hey, I played it and made it to the end. But I need to point to a few things.
1. Before reaching the good doctor at his house at start the lag is unbeliavable. Do something about that!
2. You can't expect players will play in default texture and I think it's not inportant at all.
3. As much I remember, I should do something before going to the town. I didn't.
4. Doctor told me he gave me a sword, but it never happened.
5. I couldn't stop the rain as I wanted.
6. When reaching the entrance of thelair with the boat I gone out of the boat. It teleported me to the half way from the shore to the lair.
7. When being in the lair, I checked the chests but couldn't found anything useful as I expected. I never fought the evil doctor. I used the button from the good doctor chest in his house from the start to go trough the door and then I somehow saved the world 'once again'. I know Sun Tsu said the battles are won before they start, but I believe it's not the point of the game :)

Still nice first map. You made custom builings and have some experience with the commands. I liked the main concept (I think you have the right feeling about how to make a proper story), it's fresh and clear, I was almost never lost. Hope to see more maps from you. If you need opinion or small help feel free to contact me.

It looks like a cool map. What is the seed?

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