Parkour Map 'For the sky army'

Yes, For the Sky Army IS THE NAME XD
So, i have been building a map.
It is not very long but I hope people would play it and give me some critism and stuff.
And I hope sky is going to play it one day
AND I WOULD LIKE TO PLAY A MAP WITH SKY OR TRUEMU
Sorry, had to say that
Oh yes, and IF...you can get close to Sky or TrueMU, or just spam the comments on one video xD.
Please, I ask you, please advertise this map if you liked this...
I would be so happy, and please give me critism on the map, what you liked, what not, what can be better etc.
AND... please guys...if you have a Youtube channel...
I would really REALLY appreciate it if you took the time to record the map and upload it.
And of course put this link in the desc.
And I promise, with your help too, part 2 of it is going to be lots better
Also, Subscribe to my YouTube if you like(d): http://www.youtube.com/calvin22012000