pls tell me if you think i am doing anything against the rules so i can change it


stuff that is not really important for you

this is my entry for the industrial contest i worked really hard on it for 3 weeks and i hope you like it.
i got my inspiration from the woudagemaal and some other things.

i particepated in this contest because i already wanted to make something in this style for a long time and because i am fannboy of lentebriesje and carlooo and i wanted to show my builds to them.

lore

Once there was this world named sollore, there was not that much high tech like we see in our nowadays world. Just farmers and craftsmen. But then Irise invented something he called a steam engine this machane was able to create huge powers. in the meanwhile was the amount of people fast growing in sollore. they thought Irise could maybe find a solution for this problem and he actually did his idea was a huge amount of work but they could do it because they needed only half as much people on the land because Irise inventions had made evrything alot easy'er. So they started his insane idea this idea was that they should make a wall of grass stone and dirt around the island they lived and then pump all the water out. This worked and evryone got food but Irise had some other plans for this world then his civilians he decided that the world would be alot better iff most people would live in the city and worked in the factory's he was going to make. This ment that evryone had a terrible live beside him and his friends they fancy houses and an easy life. this story is kinda stupid but i am not a book writer nor am i fluent english.
hope you enjoyd it and remember eventualy Irise will be killed in a revolution(yes a sad anding for a genius but he seemed to be a bitch) and the power would go to a parlement that has been choosen by voting.