The City of Florin [Download]

avatar MoNoO
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
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The city of Florin is one of the many mining cities found in a cavern rich with minerals! The era of this city was right when the new age of steam punk mixed with Medieval.The city is constructed of many housing districts and the villagers mostly trade. over head there are four bi-planes and two large carrier airships!

If you download the map im sorry but my MCedit work isnt very good, its my first time using MCedit, next time it will be much better.



Enjoy!

sincerely
-MoNoO

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Creditliltaco for terraforming tips and make a house!, Tinklepoo- helper, dtowell- Airship carriers
Progress100% complete
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1 Update Logs

Update #1 : 07/29/2012 10:19:32 amJul 29th, 2012

added a few more interiors.

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10/27/2012 7:08 pm
Level 1 : New Crafter
animeabsol20
Epical :3
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08/02/2012 4:35 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
Sanctora
Made this cinematic video with your creation in it, hope you like it :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=utKgvD8zt7c&feature=youtu.be
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08/02/2012 4:41 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
Epic! =D
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07/30/2012 4:22 am
Level 1 : New Miner
Sanctora
Would you mind if your build was in a youtube video? All credit would of course go to you and there would be links to this page. Also there would be no ads. Please get back to me.
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07/30/2012 3:00 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
yes you may aslong as the server it was built on gets credit aswell. the ip is on my planet minecraft page.
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07/29/2012 4:57 pm
Level 81 : Elite Architect
Enmah
It's a very good start ! I said that cause this project is actually cool but I'm sure It could be awesome with more elements which make a city alive. Keep up the good work !

I just subscribed to you to see what you're going to do next.
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07/30/2012 9:30 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
Thanks for the feedback and for the sub! =D I am planning on remastering this project
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07/29/2012 12:48 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Cake
Geppetto
Since this is "exactly" my building-style, I think it's easy to understand I like this...
But (whew, that there always has to be a "but") I do think your town isn't busy enough; it looks abadonded.
You should add some cranes, pipes, gears, machines...
Maybe even a water tank or a bigger dock would make a big difference.
Also, as lynch already mentioned: You need something to make "the style".
May it be the dirty, industrial or the clean, natural style... without plants or industry, it looks a bit "dead".

Whew, this sounds kinda negative, like my feedback does most :/
Do not think I hate your work or so, it's really great.
I just think you could do better, give it a try :D
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07/30/2012 9:29 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! =D I am working on revising this city as we speak!
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07/28/2012 2:52 pm
Level 81 : Elite Architect
lynchyinc
Nice work on the build :)

A few trees hanging on the cliff side would look nice though - trees can hide terraforming and really add something to a project.

Keep up the good work.
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07/28/2012 4:40 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
Thank you very much for the tips! =D And i'm glade you like it!
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07/28/2012 12:25 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
Black_Tomcat
It looks cool if you see it the first time.
But you should be able to enter all the houses. You should also add some details like pipes, or giant steam mining machines. If you will improve it, good luck. I hope you'll do.
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07/28/2012 12:40 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
MoNoO
yeah thank you for the awesome feed back! I will either improve this one of use these tips on my next project! =D
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07/28/2012 12:09 pm
Level 22 : Expert Narwhal
dtowell
You should put something in there about Zephire.
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