Published Oct 2nd, 2020, 10/2/20 8:43 pm
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I couldn’t do her demon tail cause 1. It’s the same color as her skirt. And 2. I’m lazy.
This is my first skin (posted anyway) so I do hope you like it, feedback is welcome!
mmk but buddy, stop paying attention to the palette, other then the palette the skin is pretty dull. Okay move along to a better skin now.
This is my first skin (posted anyway) so I do hope you like it, feedback is welcome!
mmk but buddy, stop paying attention to the palette, other then the palette the skin is pretty dull. Okay move along to a better skin now.
Gender | Female |
Format | Java |
Model | Alex |
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cough cough
-the shading in the torso is a bit too square, try to make it rounder for it to have... personality(?
-sahde on legs very bland
-the light technique you're using is kind of inconsistent as in, in her torso you gave her a more centered kind of light while in her head it's coming from one place and fading when going to the other side
-the colours (not the shades of the colours) are too contrasting
-the armour layer gives the skin more volume so it's kind of... weird to look at when used in such a thin line [REGARDLESS it looks cool in the preview even though it looks kind of weird in 3d so plus one point]
-the skin lacks shape
-the back is literally 3 rectangles lol
overall it's pretty solid but you can still get better. study other skin creators' stuff (personally i recommend michiru), experiment with colours, shapes, etc
i don't want you to get discouraged so use this feedback/criticism/rambling to strenghten your skin making power and take all the clout!
...just try leave some for me ok?