Lonely - A Skin with a Poem Minecraft Skin
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Lonely - A Skin with a Poem

Published Nov 29th, 2013, 11/29/13 3:28 am
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Unnumbered Tears's Avatar Unnumbered Tears
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Agh I'm lonely
So take this poem

The Poem


A deep pain

A hidden scar

Iron blades forever mar

Unnumbered tears cannot wash away

Tears are useless anyway

Oh God, I can't show my heart

For those without mercy to rip it apart

My secret must remain unknown

Or twice-denounced and twice alone.

The prisoner mouldering in the cell

Could smoothly knock down the rotting wall

But the dangers are more fearsome

From without than from within

And the wall stands

My soul remains aimless

My personality shapeless

You do not know my face.


There are actually two versions to this poem, with some minor changes to the one my sister helped me edit.
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07/16/2017 4:57 am
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Kawaii TapuLele
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So this is my story: One day i was so lonely i decided to make Free Build on hypixel. I posted this the day after it. My BFF was offline my other BFF was playing skywars in a party. I was so lonely that day and the pokemon music box music i had on didn't help at all. I have 5 difficultys IRL so i find lonelyness a pain. Today i searched up skins that had Lonely in them. I found this poem and it made me feal i will get more friends..... just one day i will. This poem isn't rusty or creepy to me, it is a work of art. THE MUSIC BOX LINK > www.youtube.com/watch?v=XzXgUIyPR08
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07/22/2017 12:53 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Artist
Unnumbered Tears
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Sorry for the late reply! Thank you for the diamond and lovely comment. I hope your difficulties are fixed soon and you have lots of fun times with friends! :)
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07/16/2017 5:00 am
Level 1 : New Network
Kawaii TapuLele
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Now i'll search more Lonely skins! =D
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06/21/2014 12:36 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Unicorn
Monster Unicorns
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Great poem Loved the use of words :)
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06/21/2014 11:13 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Artist
Unnumbered Tears
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Thanks! At the time I wrote it, I hadn't written anything else in almost 6 months, so I was a little rusty, and it's nice to hear that it wasn't a failure.
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06/21/2014 11:30 pm
Level 37 : Artisan Unicorn
Monster Unicorns
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Didn't sound at all rusty! It was great :D
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12/17/2013 5:52 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Goblin
NinjaGreyWolf
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I love the poem n.n
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12/17/2013 5:53 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Artist
Unnumbered Tears
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hehe thanks :3
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11/30/2013 1:54 pm
Level 10 : Journeyman Network
Adam
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Are you Oscar Wilde by chance?
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11/30/2013 2:18 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Artist
Unnumbered Tears
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No. Do you like him? If so, may I take your comment as a compliment? :P
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