Published Mar 17th, 2014, 3/17/14 1:02 am
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Story time
There was once a temple on the water, in the north of the atlantic ocean. Osteo was a young human who lived there. He was alone there, but he believed he had a connection with the sea animals. There was one problem which he had to deal with very often, pirates. This ones tried to steal anything they find. Osteo was the only one who could protect the temple from them. Sharks fought by his side as well, so he wasn't fully alone.
It was common for him to see a pirate ship coming, but one day he say four. He didn't know how he was going to protect the temple this time, because not even with the shark's help would be enough to stop them. The pirates brought their ships near the temple and started using their cannons. This time they didn't want to steal, but to destroy the temple. After one minute of bombardment, the temple began to sink. Osteo had 2 possible decisions, to swim away and escape, or to stay in the temple and sink with it. He believed that he should stay, so he did.
The first thing that came to his mind was death, however he didn't die. When he tried to breath under the water, his body started to change. He was having a strange feeling in all his body, he was evolving. Osteo could adapt to the life under the sea. He stayed in the temple forever, being the first human who evolved in that way. The pirates were no longer a problem, as he never saw them again .
Story time
There was once a temple on the water, in the north of the atlantic ocean. Osteo was a young human who lived there. He was alone there, but he believed he had a connection with the sea animals. There was one problem which he had to deal with very often, pirates. This ones tried to steal anything they find. Osteo was the only one who could protect the temple from them. Sharks fought by his side as well, so he wasn't fully alone.
It was common for him to see a pirate ship coming, but one day he say four. He didn't know how he was going to protect the temple this time, because not even with the shark's help would be enough to stop them. The pirates brought their ships near the temple and started using their cannons. This time they didn't want to steal, but to destroy the temple. After one minute of bombardment, the temple began to sink. Osteo had 2 possible decisions, to swim away and escape, or to stay in the temple and sink with it. He believed that he should stay, so he did.
The first thing that came to his mind was death, however he didn't die. When he tried to breath under the water, his body started to change. He was having a strange feeling in all his body, he was evolving. Osteo could adapt to the life under the sea. He stayed in the temple forever, being the first human who evolved in that way. The pirates were no longer a problem, as he never saw them again .
Gender | Male |
Format | Java |
Model | Steve |
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*sniffles*
Why?! This is amazing!
Although there are a LOTof typos so you should go back and fix those.