You did great!
Just remember do not make your colors too dark, as you did a little bit on the sides of the hair, if you want things to look darker much not dirtier, I suggest maybe only making the color darking by a very small amount and changing the color a bit...

For instance instead of making Pink darker I make it a little bit more purple.

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The colors are very pretty, aswell as your style, but I think where the gap bit in the top, there should be some sort of shading on the skin and the bralette to define it, and to make the skirt or hair a different color or lighter or darker shade (though the hair and skirt are fine, its just my personal preference when it comes to clothes to make the outfit a different color from the hair)