Dude the idea is good but you just havn't worked it out good enough the contrast hurts my eyes but i don't really think that this is you're best skin i think you have the creativity. Maybe you should use another skin making program use mcskin3d it's much easier but b.t.w i like your robot man skin! If you want help you can contact me on planetmc but i do see you're a natural talent for skining you just gotta practice more!;p